Across Oceans

thanks for all your comments today, jack. You are a great friend here!

A lovely sentimental write Jack, good luck in Catie's contest and I gave you a "bite" in Linda-Marie's bite me contest. Love Alexa

Well, you're just that kind of guy, and the world needs that kind of person; so glad you are here as I do enjoy your poems Jack.

hope u will consider entering my new contest Jack.. u always make me smile and think luv..

AGAIN you chose such a simple path for this contest but came up with a very sweet amazing little poem. Man, I hope I can think of something now!!

Jack, this is very lovely,, hope the message is reached... good luck in the contest..pd

This is the first short obe poem that I've seen so far! I really like that you successfully created a short poem going out to help your friends who are in distress! This is an amazing write that I've read! I thoroughly enjoyed your poem that I have read this evening! I love your write a lot! Great Work!!

Enjoyed reading this eve, Jack..Reads like a winning work..Thanks for stopping by..Good luck in Catie's contest..Sara

You said more in five lines than I could in a much longer poem. Catie's going to love this one too, Jack. I wonder if she knows what a great friend you are to other Soupers. I'll be waiting for your soul to arrive tonight! Best wishes in the contest, dear. Love, Carolyn

well done! simple but very touching.

ah a treasure Jack.. simple but so poignant are these lines.. Catie will be touched as am I ..good luck.. hand is ok ..it is me.. I expect too much too soon.. then cry like a girlie girl..oh..pets licking tears s they fall.. and I smile.. ha..