Nette Onclaud Poet Senryu

Across a Black Mat

ACROSS A BLACK MAT
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splash of yellow hues
winking across a black mat
breaths dance with stardust

light folds drenched eyelids
skins under quilt of twilight ~
lullaby the moon

and so aprons sleep
hanging on a weary chair ~
smelling  of meatloaf 


senryu
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Brian Strand's Contest
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By nette onclaud

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Andrea Dietrich July 15, 2013 at 11:11 PM Very interesting ones, Nette. Nice to see you won a contest long ago with these. Soupmail

Kash Poet August 31, 2011 at 10:02 PM Hi Nette,sorry I am late.This is excellent poetry from you.Congratulations on your win.

Charlotte Puddifoot August 31, 2011 at 5:06 PM congrats on a joint third place win! beautiful words and beautiful imagery as always :-)

Caryl Muzzey August 31, 2011 at 10:45 AM Congratulations on your win with this fabulous write, I enjoyed the read~ Caryl

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 30, 2011 at 9:55 PM Congrats Nette luv on another amazing win with more magnificent words and splendid poetry ..so fine.. my friend..

Olusegun Arowolo August 30, 2011 at 6:17 PM Nice Senryu,Nette.Congratulations on your well deserved win in this contest....peace be..Olusegun.

Sara Kendrick August 30, 2011 at 4:48 PM Congrats..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown August 30, 2011 at 7:23 AM Congratulations on your well deserved winning piece Nette. Love, Carol

David Williams August 30, 2011 at 3:07 AM hey Nette, congrats on a great win , David

Francine Roberts August 29, 2011 at 11:21 PM congrats on your third place win nette, great job

Doris Culverhouse August 24, 2011 at 12:03 PM enjoyed reading today!! Good morning!! cheers and a cup of brew!!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 23, 2011 at 10:00 PM well this is mesmerizing and inviting Nette luv.. a sure winner and chart topper Nette luv as your passion shows in these vibrating lines ..luv.. good luck ...

Elizabeth Wesley August 23, 2011 at 8:52 PM Your visions are always amazing Nette, I could say you paint mind pictures as no one else can.

Jack Ross Jr. August 23, 2011 at 4:57 PM Wow, color poem supun with golden threads, morning, noon, and night....with love...old Jack

Andrea Dietrich August 23, 2011 at 12:52 AM wow, that last one sure hit the senses! Great ending senryu, Nette. And best of luck in the contest. thanks for my win in your carnival contest.I enjoyed doing it.

Sara Kendrick August 22, 2011 at 11:46 AM I especially like the last one..Reads like a mother or father who has prepared a comforting meal..Sara

Steven Cooke August 22, 2011 at 9:07 AM another beautiful write, just like shelling peas, as we say in england. top bat old bean.

S.Jagathsimhan Nair August 22, 2011 at 8:56 AM yet another stunning beauty, nette,thanx for your sweet words too, hugs, jag

Kash Poet August 22, 2011 at 4:36 AM Come visit......

Kash Poet August 22, 2011 at 4:33 AM The last stanza...that is awesome.What a strings of Senryus!! enjoyed the imagery here Nette.Best wishes in the contest.

Judy Ball August 22, 2011 at 1:08 AM Another beautiful piece from your skilled pen my friend. Lovely imagery. God Bless, JB

Nancy Jones August 22, 2011 at 12:12 AM LOL!! a netski indeed! many waves of preeshedness to you... thanks so much for being.

Russell Sivey August 22, 2011 at 12:02 AM Great imagery! "lullaby the moon" is one of my favorite lines of all time...you wrote flawlessly!! Thank you Nette for sharing this poem...good luck on the contest!