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Acrophobia

Acrophobia, the fear of heights, yet falling in love, faith wins.

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A  MlNICHU Rhyme Aba, cBc, dbD, ABD. Syllable count : Stanza 1: 6,12,3 Stanza 2: 4,8,2 Stanza 3: 2,4,1 Stanza 4: 6,8,1.
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shadowy silhouette
uncertainty ripping through unravelling mind
cheeks get wet

tears roll in fear
acrophobia grips confined
comes near

someone
falls in love, blind
won

shadowy silhouette
acrophobia grips confined
won

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Date: 10/11/2023 2:35:00 PM
Well done! Congratulations! :)
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Date: 10/7/2023 10:00:00 PM
Brilliant rhymes and great choice for this theme, to describe fears of one that has acrophobia.love it. Congratulations on your win
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Date: 9/29/2023 9:31:00 AM
It would be so hard to live with a phobia. Well done
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Date: 9/28/2023 7:19:00 PM
Like the fear of boys talking to girls I can relate this poem but with less fear.
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