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Acrid Soul

HURT (Acrid Soul) Hurt Lingers on her tongue. Lips unable to adjust. Prayers be- came her remedy. Lips slowly moving; causing her tongue to breathe yet again. In hopes of not tasting another acrid soul as he. Now, oft to the next entree. Pace, G INK-U-SCRIPT 05-07-2012

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Just That Archaic Poet

Date: 8/21/2013 2:25:00 PM

I am enjoying being introduced to new styles of poetry. Although I have been writing poetry for myriad years, I confess that I am ignorant of all these different styles I am discovering. This is cool; I really dig it :)

Sakyra V Mance

Date: 7/1/2012 8:04:00 AM

I really like this one.

Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 8/7/2012 6:08:00 AM

Thanks a lot Sakyra!!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/27/2012 4:46:00 PM

G Pace, this is a very nice and moving etheree* for us females, I love the waking up deal.. Now who can ever go back to the same bitter taste. Waking up in the morning to old dreams gets kind of old... thanks God, for all them peeps out there stealing hearts left to right,.. anyways~ Back to your poem, I'm glad she is moving on to another feel, maybe this one will feel a whole lot better. Hip Hip Horay for Prayers... God Bless you...PD

Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 8/7/2012 6:07:00 AM

Lol..I just love your comments...but no, we shouldn't want to go back to that bitter taste.. :)

Blake Hannah

Date: 6/26/2012 9:15:00 PM

It's probably a little late, but I haven't been on here in awhile...Featured poem of the week? 0.o I'm confused >.>

Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 8/7/2012 6:05:00 AM

Ok..I'll explain.

Doreen Wright

Date: 6/8/2012 7:42:00 AM

Simple and clear...pain in poetry. Lovely poem!

Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 8/7/2012 6:05:00 AM

Thank you my dearest sweet Doreen!! :)

Robert Johnson

Date: 6/4/2012 3:42:00 PM

The bitter taste of wasted love gets thrown out with the scraps. To leave a dog beg for a bone and starve to death, perhaps. The winds of change blew up a storm. The winds of change are now the norm.

Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 6/4/2012 9:05:00 PM

Love all your comments Robert!! Thank you dearly!!!

Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 6/4/2012 9:04:00 PM

Love all your comments Robert!! Thank you dearly!!!

Carma Sanderson

Date: 6/1/2012 11:38:00 PM

I Felt That One, peirce my Heart. Ouch!!! lovely said. Carma

Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 6/2/2012 12:26:00 AM

Thank you my dear poetess Carma!!!

Asheka Collins

Date: 5/31/2012 1:31:00 PM

Lovely

Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 5/31/2012 2:39:00 PM

Thank you dearly!!

Patrick Cornwall

Date: 5/18/2012 8:20:00 PM

I likeyour poetry and enjoyed...patrick

Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 5/18/2012 9:21:00 PM

Thank you so much!!

Ivy Vresk

Date: 5/14/2012 6:46:00 PM

''Prayers become her remedy'' Love from above is stronger then any hate and heal bitter taste,love your writing,so strong and deep,thank you for stooping by,Ivy

Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 5/14/2012 7:20:00 PM

Hugs!!!

Ivy Vresk

Date: 5/14/2012 6:45:00 PM

''Prayers become her remedy'' Love from above is stronger then any hate and heal bitter taste,love your writing,so strong and deep,thank you for stooping by,Ivy

Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 5/14/2012 7:20:00 PM

No thank you!!

Joi Murphy

Date: 5/9/2012 8:54:00 PM

that is so deep!

Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 5/10/2012 4:37:00 AM

Well thank you Joi for stopping by and sharing with me..please do come back...hugs!!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/9/2012 11:13:00 AM

Small and strong - - grows always to something BIG ! - Pace G. you are the poet of this big poem, well done. - oxox hugs Anne-Lise

Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 5/9/2012 12:53:00 PM

Love your support Anne!!!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/9/2012 11:00:00 AM

yeow, you make my head spin with this sense of tender angst, pace...you got me right on the first line... grreeat read..;) huggs!

Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 5/9/2012 12:52:00 PM

Thank you sweetheart always!! huggs

Bl Devnath

Date: 5/8/2012 1:22:00 PM

You are brave and wrote likewise. Loved always, bl

Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 5/8/2012 2:36:00 PM

Thank you madam!! I love the comment given,

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 5/8/2012 10:09:00 AM

First off, very cool title (and thoughts into it), G! Sometimes hurt can definitely do that, leave a bad taste in the mouth but you are so right, prayers can heal-- love how you refer to it as "remedy"! Hopefully she'll taste something sweeter this time around! A loaded write in so few lines, really love this one :D

Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 5/8/2012 12:27:00 PM

lol..Thank you so much for sharing with me. Nikko..hugs