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Acrid Soul

HURT (Acrid Soul)

Hurt
Lingers
on her tongue.
Lips unable
to adjust. Prayers be-
came her remedy. Lips
slowly moving; causing her
tongue to breathe yet again. In hopes
of not tasting another acrid
soul as he. Now, oft to the next entree.


Pace, G
INK-U-SCRIPT

05-07-2012

Copyright © Pace Ink-U-Script | Year Posted 2012

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Just That Archaic Poet

August 21, 2013 at 2:25 PM

I am enjoying being introduced to new styles of poetry. Although I have been writing poetry for myriad years, I confess that I am ignorant of all these different styles I am discovering. This is cool; I really dig it :)

July 1, 2012 at 8:04 AM

I really like this one.

Pace Ink-U-Script

August 7, 2012 at 6:08 AM

Thanks a lot Sakyra!!

Poet Destroyer A

June 27, 2012 at 4:46 PM

G Pace, this is a very nice and moving etheree* for us females, I love the waking up deal.. Now who can ever go back to the same bitter taste. Waking up in the morning to old dreams gets kind of old... thanks God, for all them peeps out there stealing hearts left to right,.. anyways~ Back to your poem, I'm glad she is moving on to another feel, maybe this one will feel a whole lot better. Hip Hip Horay for Prayers... God Bless you...PD

Pace Ink-U-Script

August 7, 2012 at 6:07 AM

Lol..I just love your comments...but no, we shouldn't want to go back to that bitter taste.. :)

June 26, 2012 at 9:15 PM

It's probably a little late, but I haven't been on here in awhile...Featured poem of the week? 0.o I'm confused >.>

Pace Ink-U-Script

August 7, 2012 at 6:05 AM

Ok..I'll explain.

June 8, 2012 at 7:42 AM

Simple and clear...pain in poetry. Lovely poem!

Pace Ink-U-Script

August 7, 2012 at 6:05 AM

Thank you my dearest sweet Doreen!! :)

June 4, 2012 at 3:42 PM

The bitter taste of wasted love gets thrown out with the scraps. To leave a dog beg for a bone and starve to death, perhaps. The winds of change blew up a storm. The winds of change are now the norm.

Pace Ink-U-Script

June 4, 2012 at 9:05 PM

Love all your comments Robert!! Thank you dearly!!!

Pace Ink-U-Script

June 4, 2012 at 9:04 PM

Love all your comments Robert!! Thank you dearly!!!

Carma Sanderson

June 1, 2012 at 11:38 PM

I Felt That One, peirce my Heart. Ouch!!! lovely said. Carma

Pace Ink-U-Script

June 2, 2012 at 12:26 AM

Thank you my dear poetess Carma!!!

May 31, 2012 at 1:31 PM

Lovely

Pace Ink-U-Script

May 31, 2012 at 2:39 PM

Thank you dearly!!

Patrick Cornwall

May 18, 2012 at 8:20 PM

I likeyour poetry and enjoyed...patrick

Pace Ink-U-Script

May 18, 2012 at 9:21 PM

Thank you so much!!

May 14, 2012 at 6:46 PM

''Prayers become her remedy'' Love from above is stronger then any hate and heal bitter taste,love your writing,so strong and deep,thank you for stooping by,Ivy

Pace Ink-U-Script

May 14, 2012 at 7:20 PM

Hugs!!!

May 14, 2012 at 6:45 PM

''Prayers become her remedy'' Love from above is stronger then any hate and heal bitter taste,love your writing,so strong and deep,thank you for stooping by,Ivy

Pace Ink-U-Script

May 14, 2012 at 7:20 PM

No thank you!!

May 9, 2012 at 8:54 PM

that is so deep!

Pace Ink-U-Script

May 10, 2012 at 4:37 AM

Well thank you Joi for stopping by and sharing with me..please do come back...hugs!!

Anne-Lise Andresen

May 9, 2012 at 11:13 AM

Small and strong - - grows always to something BIG ! - Pace G. you are the poet of this big poem, well done. - oxox hugs Anne-Lise

Pace Ink-U-Script

May 9, 2012 at 12:53 PM

Love your support Anne!!!

May 9, 2012 at 11:00 AM

yeow, you make my head spin with this sense of tender angst, pace...you got me right on the first line... grreeat read..;) huggs!

Pace Ink-U-Script

May 9, 2012 at 12:52 PM

Thank you sweetheart always!! huggs

May 8, 2012 at 1:22 PM

You are brave and wrote likewise. Loved always, bl

Pace Ink-U-Script

May 8, 2012 at 2:36 PM

Thank you madam!! I love the comment given,

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

May 8, 2012 at 10:09 AM

First off, very cool title (and thoughts into it), G! Sometimes hurt can definitely do that, leave a bad taste in the mouth but you are so right, prayers can heal-- love how you refer to it as "remedy"! Hopefully she'll taste something sweeter this time around! A loaded write in so few lines, really love this one :D

Pace Ink-U-Script

May 8, 2012 at 12:27 PM

lol..Thank you so much for sharing with me. Nikko..hugs

May 8, 2012 at 9:25 AM

very profoundly penned! Cindy Lu aka Lucinda

Pace Ink-U-Script

May 8, 2012 at 12:26 PM

Thank you!! I've missed you.

May 8, 2012 at 8:33 AM

Mr. Pace, cool words..David

Pace Ink-U-Script

May 8, 2012 at 12:26 PM

Thanks David!!

May 8, 2012 at 6:00 AM

This is just stunning, I love the idea of prayers being her remedy.. We need these gentle reminders. Thanks G :) Wilma

Pace Ink-U-Script

May 8, 2012 at 6:43 AM

Yes maam indeed we do!! Thanks for stopping by.

May 7, 2012 at 6:21 PM

very nice Pace, excellent read. Juanita

Pace Ink-U-Script

May 7, 2012 at 7:36 PM

Thank you madam!!

Elliott Bowe The Drunken Poet

May 7, 2012 at 5:24 PM

This is truly amazing,just spectacular..........WOW...........

Pace Ink-U-Script

May 7, 2012 at 5:31 PM

Thank you dear poet!!

Laura Breidenthal

May 7, 2012 at 1:32 PM

Beautiful and powerful verse! :D Always, Laura

Pace Ink-U-Script

May 7, 2012 at 2:21 PM

Thank you sweetheart!!

May 7, 2012 at 1:08 PM

Bravo!! An awsome write Pace...this one is a fav....you peeked into the window of my heart :O well done write....big hugs deb

Pace Ink-U-Script

May 7, 2012 at 1:10 PM

Oh wow...huge smiles over here!!! Hugs...and thanks!!

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