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Craig Cornish's Acoustic Shadows Contest

Acoustic Shadows

The tremolo of mourning jays vibrates
 In bittersweet tracks when nightfall scans 
An almost dim backdrop, gripped
By low warbles from birds' paean
 Indistinct as dusty tunes--a whip, wallop
A whistle of drones becomes
 dangerous and still;
 Throaty on a lane of funeral's last rites:

The hazily drawn view turns ambient... 
it is another blasted evening
Moistening wail of eyes with monotone lull
that I hide my face 
from past autumnal romps
reminding me of chimes, soft cuddles 
pressed in heavenly light...I whisper
to a young silhouette  now cradled
By the starkest of blue stars...
Tunes stale, 
while jays moan on the horizon, until...
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Hind Avatar
April 29, 2026 at 10:51 PM
you might want to change the first line "iays" to "jays" but this is a beautiful, perfect piece...
Greece Avatar
April 25, 2026 at 7:14 AM
The pounding sense of pain shown through birds' drone is impressive.
Kendrick Avatar
April 25, 2026 at 5:48 AM
This one reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Very unique and creative. Sara K
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