Acoustic Shadows

I'm five and it's a fire-dive -
sweaty-skinned and flambé-limbed,
kindling tingling in my throat,

matches scratching sandpaper skin.
Lying on the terracotta velour settee
watching sparky scenes igniting the room -

a terracotta army of sparks
marching through the grate,
grating like bars on the old forest gate,

black bars of night growing tall on the wall
and I'm always up against it
hearing echoes of the ethereal eternal

Help us help us we'll help you...
I want to be well, to enter the well
cooling the heat and heart of the house,

dousing bouquets of firelight
petals flickering on amber glass bottles of medicine,
her hooked hands feeding me aspirin, penicillin,

cream and green torpedo tablets
fever-spearing, strobing swirling the room.
Now nightshade creepers spine-twine in dark dreams

black echoes build on a sonograph screen
descending into the no-way-out well,
the inescapable hell of not well.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Dietrich Avatar
April 26, 2026 at 11:10 PM
Hell of no hell. Wow. What a powerful ending to a powerful write. You will do well with this.. Soupmail for you
Parker Avatar
April 22, 2026 at 4:29 PM
Your darkness tends towards obsidian dank. While poem is powerful, I cringe at the reality so near a fragile skin tension ready to burst apart. Listening, Pearl of Great Price. :•\\
Hind Avatar
April 21, 2026 at 3:22 PM
Powerful and hungry- this is dark but living, wonderful writing, Charlotte
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