Acorns

Aloft in mighty oaks Autumn signals their fall As eager squirrels wait Anticipating an Avalanche, nutty treats After which comes the feast Accommodating all

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Sandra Haight

Date: 8/14/2016 9:01:00 PM

You have captured so much about acorns and squirrels and preparation for winter in so few syllables and lines, Joseph. Congratulations on your fine placement in the contest. Sandra

Kim Merryman

Date: 8/14/2016 2:06:00 PM

Joseph, I love your image of squirrels gathering acorns and then having a feast. So cute! Congrats on your well written Pleiades! Thank you for supporting my contest. Blessings!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/13/2016 2:49:00 PM

I LOVE your entry Joseph! Your imagery just jumps off the page and brings a smile. Congratulations on your well deserved high placement! 7 ; )

Paul Callus

Date: 8/13/2016 9:48:00 AM

A lovely picture depicting cute squirrels and nutty treats! A well tackled tricky form, Joseph! Congratulations on this fine win. // paul

Jan Allison

Date: 8/13/2016 9:38:00 AM

Dropping back with my congrats Joseph:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/13/2016 4:20:00 AM

- Congratulations on your winning poems, Joseph - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Lu Loo

Date: 8/13/2016 3:42:00 AM

Joseph, congrats ony our placement! :)-luloo

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/13/2016 1:01:00 AM

VERY WELL DONE. I was thinking of acorns as one of my own words to use but sure never would have come up with one to beat this one, Joseph. Big congrats

Laura Leiser

Date: 8/10/2016 11:28:00 PM

I can just picture this scene with a squirrel and the acorns! Great poem, Joseph, and GL in the contest:)

Daniel Turner

Date: 8/10/2016 8:13:00 AM

Fantastic imagery in this one Joseph. I once write a poem entitled "Little Gray Pirates" you might enjoy about squirrels looking for acorns. Good luck in contest!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/10/2016 7:16:00 AM

- A wonderful "A- poem", Joseph - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 8/10/2016 7:15:00 AM

Delightful imagery of the avalanche of nuts - I chose the autumn theme too but have been inspired to write a second poem:-) Good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx