Nette Onclaud Poet Couplet

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Edward Ibeh's This or That Contest, Vol 26 Written Jul 16. 2024 Form: double couplet in every line

Acme

Images surge through April bold, a magical thrill I do behold;
Across the earth a glorious rite, surpassing human delight.
Clouds descend with minty air, their luster beyond compare ;
This tableu...a prelude call, as peaks of my  soul's climb enthrall!

Such grandeur holds out its charms, when crest of nature's glow disarms,
And her pomp explodes on skies that resonate with my sighs...
To bask within this flaming scheme; earth reaches its height, supreme
As ecstasy fills the whorl where mirth and magic unfurl

A canticle rings out so soft as ingots of stars flick,  aloft...
finally the view is set in one fire glow I can't forget; 
sweet the acme of divine core as my exultations soar!

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Len Gasun July 28, 2024 at 7:04 PM So upliftingly and gorgeous! An excellent rhyme poem that I dearly adore too. Big congrats on your well-deserved top win my dearest Nette! Thank you so much for sharing. Blessings to you always and your writings. Btw, I've invited you in fb but up to now, still unaccepted. I also sent you message. I hope you're always doing great. I'm always praying for your safety there. Sana wala ng malakas na bagyo na darating. Tcare always. Sending love and hugs

Crystol Woods July 28, 2024 at 7:31 AM Awe...a breath of fresh air! Congratulations! Xo

Janis Medders Tobechi July 28, 2024 at 6:56 AM Congratulations on your win. Very well expressed .

Beata Agustin July 28, 2024 at 5:56 AM Wow! Congrats, Kabayan! Indeed, delighting and delightful from the start 'til the end. Ang ganda, ang galing... God bless you.

Christuraj Alex July 27, 2024 at 9:50 PM With many beautiful images this poem is a gem. Congratulations!

thriveni c mysore July 27, 2024 at 8:44 PM congratulations dear poet. happy writing.

David Drowley July 27, 2024 at 7:10 PM Congratulations on our win! I enjoy each line with internal/external rhyme. Rather Robert Service like.

Edward Ibeh July 27, 2024 at 7:08 PM Wow! What a pleasant surprise to see you writing again, Nette. You obviously haven't lost your touch. Brilliant poem. Congratulations on your top win in my contest!

Ink Empress July 18, 2024 at 3:17 AM The cadence and the way youv woven words here to paint imagery and flow it with emotions is beyond impeccable! I love especially “ on skies that resonate with my sighs”” where mirth and magic unfurl” seamless alliterations too! Pleasure reading! Best wishes.

Andrea Dietrich July 17, 2024 at 1:21 PM wow, I love your take on this theme. It almost felt rhymed to me. I guess because it flowed so smoothly. A FAVE. I would be surprised if this did not take first place. My entry sucks by comparison.