Acknowledgment

While suffering the eternal dusk . . .
I realized . .
I was born in the heavens,
with an endless urge . . .
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Agustin Avatar
April 25, 2024 at 4:14 AM
I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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February 9, 2016 at 2:17 AM
AWESOME POEM
Walker  Avatar
March 9, 2014 at 4:04 AM
So beautifully stated M.T. The heavens are amongst us... Verlena
Andresen Avatar
November 24, 2013 at 7:18 AM
- Well done ! - - Like it !!!! :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Peterson Avatar
November 20, 2013 at 11:02 AM
This one made me stop and ponder. I love the endless urge.
Elyas Avatar
November 24, 2013 at 6:23 AM
Thanks Mark for such precious comments.. I'm so obliged..
Kamoonpuri Avatar
November 18, 2013 at 11:07 PM
Woah wow deep in brevity. H. Adam was born in heaven so... Great poem! Khoob if urdu is yor mothertongue like mine. I hope u read my poems too n tel me if u like any.
Elyas Avatar
November 24, 2013 at 6:26 AM
Thanks Syeda!! Its indeed a great moment to have your comments on here..
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