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My husband and I will be together dating and marriage next month 52 years..
Next month, March, our young love will be alive For one-half century plus two years; our love Has stood through test which cause most to crash dive. Our paths have gone to places undreamed of Paths that we would not have traveled One not very beaten down or worn path Many of these journeys, we would have canceled And would have left really fast. God had a plan to weave us together Creating unusual tapestry On those grassy paths storms we have weathered Drawing closer, love lasting, ancientry Young love when first begun, hope, excitement Half-century together love's acknowledgement Sponsor: Francine Roberts Contest: 4 forms, 4 themes My choice: Sonnet, Lasting Love Date: Monday, January 23, 2012

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Date: 1/25/2012 2:16:00 AM
wow! those two lines, a never-ending life of love. beautiful Sara, simply beautiful. good luck on the contest and felicitations for you both
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Date: 1/24/2012 5:45:00 AM
Congratulations on your long lasting love Sara. Thank you for your kind comments on my writings. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/23/2012 7:11:00 PM
congradulations on 52 years!!! good luck in the contest! john
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Date: 1/23/2012 6:42:00 PM
This is a wonderful write my friend! I enjoyed the multiple paths you have taken with your love, so many different places you've gone and ended up to be! Whatever you've been through, your love has lasted, that's what matters! Congratulations! Awesome Work!!
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