Acknowledgement

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                      My words no longer rattle empty

                       when landing on a friendly ear



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For Brian Strand's Contest "What You Will"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Devonshire Avatar
May 6, 2011 at 5:51 PM
So many of the entries are outstanding, Carrie, but this one touches my heart in a special way. You'll do great in the contest! Love, Carolyn
Spahillari Avatar
May 6, 2011 at 6:40 AM
sounds great in just a few words
Peranteau Avatar
May 6, 2011 at 6:32 AM
A perfect terse thought dear poet, well done..and by-the-by....only a poet can afirm to your thought here Carrie ! Wonderful ! Have a great weekend my friend...much love, james
Mehta Avatar
May 6, 2011 at 5:50 AM
Nice thought, deep and meaningful, carrie
La France Avatar
May 5, 2011 at 7:03 PM
I think your crystalline is lovely, Carrie, best of luck~~
Long Avatar
May 5, 2011 at 6:57 PM
this is nice and staight to the point, well done.cory
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