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Acid Reflections

Singing solo in a silo The gecko heard his echo It IS Illegal, cried jealous sea gull Regal, Bald Eagle : with a beagle?? A small smew smelt smog Frantic flying from fluorescent fog The sound of a quacking, cluck Reverberates from a Mallard duck Wings embedded in miring muck Instinctively knew that he was stuck Knowing no one gave a flying ****

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 11/17/2012 9:45:00 AM
like this one harry a lot lighter in mood and it made me chuckle at the end xx soup
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Date: 2/25/2012 9:10:00 PM
HAHAHA! This is great! Put a smile on my face. I love the rhyming scheme on this baby. :J Always, Laura
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Date: 3/4/2010 6:58:00 PM
some just can't control their jealousy. it isn't good at all to be. though. great write. it suffers but no one helps. -Always&Forever, your sister spirit Lynn much love to you, Harry
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Date: 5/19/2009 7:09:00 PM
Nice write! Thnx for sharing jeremiah
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Date: 5/18/2009 9:19:00 AM
ha ha, great rhyming- even better hallucinogenics i think
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Date: 5/15/2009 11:52:00 PM
good rhyming.
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Date: 5/12/2009 8:41:00 PM
An interesting yet, creative write.
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Date: 5/12/2009 9:48:00 AM
Interesting concept HGarvey. Puts me in the mood to watch yellow submarine again. 2nd verse has a quaint charm to it.
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Date: 5/12/2009 3:19:00 AM
HG, What a nice way to start the day. Thanks for the chuckle. (Smiling big.) I love farms, animials, and sweet laughs. Thanks. Love, Dane PS. Thanks for your mail. Will reply tonight. Going out of town shortly. Have a great day.
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Date: 5/11/2009 11:10:00 PM
Nice alliteration and great work, I left you some mail...Raul
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Date: 5/11/2009 7:35:00 PM
HG, another creative and funny write. I kneel at your feet. Love, BG
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Date: 5/11/2009 4:55:00 PM
Muahahahahahaha! You are so creative and funny! You have a delightful light side and a great sense of humor! Thanks for making me smile BIG! Love, Shar xoxo
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Date: 5/11/2009 3:37:00 PM
Very vivid description of strange thoughts from "Acid Reflections," HG! Your creativity is amazing in this write. Great sense of rhythm along with the rhyme. Love, Carolyn
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