Hgarvey Daniel Esquire Poet Rhyme

Acid Reflections

Singing solo in a silo
The gecko heard his echo

It  IS Illegal, cried jealous  sea gull
Regal, Bald Eagle : with a beagle??

A small smew smelt smog
Frantic flying from fluorescent fog
                                                
The sound of a quacking, cluck
Reverberates from a Mallard duck
Wings embedded in miring muck
 Instinctively knew that he was stuck
Knowing  no one gave a flying  ****

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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl November 17, 2012 at 9:45 AM like this one harry a lot lighter in mood and it made me chuckle at the end xx soup

Laura Breidenthal February 25, 2012 at 9:10 PM HAHAHA! This is great! Put a smile on my face. I love the rhyming scheme on this baby. :J Always, Laura

Lynette Chachere March 4, 2010 at 6:58 PM some just can't control their jealousy. it isn't good at all to be. though. great write. it suffers but no one helps. -Always&Forever, your sister spirit Lynn much love to you, Harry

Edward Orozco May 19, 2009 at 7:09 PM Nice write! Thnx for sharing jeremiah

Paul Stacey May 18, 2009 at 9:19 AM ha ha, great rhyming- even better hallucinogenics i think

Shirin Neshat May 15, 2009 at 11:52 PM good rhyming.

Charlene Bird May 12, 2009 at 8:41 PM An interesting yet, creative write.

Yoni Dvorkis May 12, 2009 at 9:48 AM Interesting concept HGarvey. Puts me in the mood to watch yellow submarine again. 2nd verse has a quaint charm to it.

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen May 12, 2009 at 3:19 AM HG, What a nice way to start the day. Thanks for the chuckle. (Smiling big.) I love farms, animials, and sweet laughs. Thanks. Love, Dane PS. Thanks for your mail. Will reply tonight. Going out of town shortly. Have a great day.

Raul Moreno May 11, 2009 at 11:10 PM Nice alliteration and great work, I left you some mail...Raul

Barbara Gorelick May 11, 2009 at 7:35 PM HG, another creative and funny write. I kneel at your feet. Love, BG

Sharon Winter May 11, 2009 at 4:55 PM Muahahahahahaha! You are so creative and funny! You have a delightful light side and a great sense of humor! Thanks for making me smile BIG! Love, Shar xoxo

Carolyn Devonshire May 11, 2009 at 3:37 PM Very vivid description of strange thoughts from "Acid Reflections," HG! Your creativity is amazing in this write. Great sense of rhythm along with the rhyme. Love, Carolyn