Achromatic Rose

ACHROMATIC ROSE the virgin on her wedding night a thorn through the heart ~ deathly cold outside Kim Rodrigues (c) 2017
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Dietrich Avatar
October 26, 2017 at 8:04 PM
The last line was like haiku for me. Is this for a contest?
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October 26, 2017 at 8:04 PM
Great verse, Kim. Looks almost like haiku!
Rodrigues Avatar
October 29, 2017 at 6:07 AM
Thanks, Andrea! xx
George   Avatar
October 26, 2017 at 7:24 PM
Very deep and profound verse, dear Kim...and thank you for your kind comments on my poem, Violin. Elaine
Rodrigues Avatar
October 26, 2017 at 7:26 PM
You’re welcome! Thanks, Elaine!
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