Achoo Haiku

Achoo Haiku

Cold swift river

Sneezes on the lotus shore

Take 2 aspirin
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Dietrich Avatar
April 19, 2014 at 9:37 PM
Hey, this is COOL haiku!!!! Let me go read some more of yours.
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