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Achoo

A sneeze signals trouble,
all hell is breaking loose,
another one seems loud,
annoying it must be,
Anna hands me Kleenex
as more body shocks come...
Achoo! Achoo!! Achoo!!!

Copyright © George Aul | Year Posted 2016

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August 13, 2016 at 4:43 PM

Dropping back with my congrats George:-) hugs Jan x

August 15, 2016 at 9:59 AM

Congrats also on 1st place............... George

August 13, 2016 at 12:09 PM

George, congrats on your well written and humorous Pleaides! Thank you for supporting my contest. Blessings!

Anne-Lise Andresen

August 13, 2016 at 8:04 AM

- Congratulations on your winning poems, George - Great, done !! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

August 13, 2016 at 11:32 AM

Thanks and congrats also............ George

Andrea Dietrich

August 13, 2016 at 1:22 AM

This was Awesomely clever. Loved it, George.

August 13, 2016 at 11:30 AM

Thank you........... George

August 10, 2016 at 2:34 AM

Ha ha ha...funny and very clever:) Good luck, George:)

August 10, 2016 at 9:31 AM

Thanks so much for the comment................ George

August 9, 2016 at 12:26 PM

Clever take on the 'A' theme - good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx

August 10, 2016 at 9:31 AM

Thanks as always, Jan................ George

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