David William Breidenthal Poet Free verse

Aching Oh So Insane

anxious as hell
crazed and disoriented
horrified to the max
isolated, i must relax
neglected as usual
grieving like a fool

optimism is empty
hopefully i don’t come undone or become hallow inside

shamefully in distress
oh so hopeless, helpless

i need relief
no need for grief
saturated by woe
and
never
ever able to be whole…

aching oh so insane…
oh so insane…
so insane…
insane…
all misery is now down the drain…
refrain from giving me your rain…

PlEaSe…
Thx

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Michael Alexander August 11, 2022 at 2:02 PM This touched my feels. Thank you for this write. I've been feeling very anxious and depressed lately. Sometimes the hope is empty, but there's still a way to fill it. This poem helped me fill the void. Thank you!