Achilles and the Tortoise

In ancient times as told in rhymes 
    there was a hero Greek
Whose mother said, “Before you’re dead 
    you should go out and seek
The glorious fame that goes with your name, 
    my dearest son Achilles.”
So Achilles set out upon that route 
    and gave up his life of ease.
And he came to a place that held a race 
    to determine the fleetest and bravest.
And he beat them all, the short and the tall, 
    and was proclaimed of Greeks the greatest.

But when he was done there came a one 
    who asked him a simple question:
“You’ve beat all the Greeks, I did hear them speak,
    but, do I dare to mention,
Your fame and your name are likely to wane 
    until you outrace a tortoise.”
Though this contestant-to-be (for a tortoise was he) 
    appeared in complete rigor mortis,
Our hero Achilles, with grace and with ease, 
    took up this one last challenge.
For he thought to outpace this reptile base 
    was a thing he could quite easily manage. 

“But before we go, since I am slow, 
    I really should have a headstart.”  
And Achilles agreed, for despite his great speed, 
    he really was not very street smart. 
And the upshot was he lost it because 
    of an ancient Greek named Zeno.
That philosopher wrote (and here I quote): 
    “No matter how fast and no matter how slow,
It follows from logic,” (‘though this sounds idiotic, 
    if I'm allowed to be blunt!),
“That the race will always be won by that mother’s son 
    who started out in front.”
 
“Though this may make one giddy, it’s quite simple really 
    and clear to any observer:
If one runs without pause to where the other just was,
    that one has now moved on further.
Since this scenario’s repeated till the race is completed, 
    the conclusion is thus inescapable: 
Whoever's behind will never catch up, at least not enough,
    and their victory was never attainable.”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Rodrigues Avatar
April 25, 2017 at 6:38 AM
Enjoyed this very much, Jerome! Congrats!
Malenfant Avatar
April 26, 2017 at 3:31 AM
Thanks.
Anderson Avatar
April 24, 2017 at 9:24 PM
Congratulations on your placement in the contest. Well done! I really enjoyed reading your poem.
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April 24, 2017 at 10:01 PM
Thanks.
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