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Achieving the Aim

I knew my Halloween candy he ate, my dear sweet brother, him I’d never hate. His fancy candy trouser I’d hide to serve as teaser, my aim I’d achieve to see him irate.
October 21, 2019 Syllable count : 10/10/7/7/10 Checked on howmanysyllables.com Contest : If I Were Your Brother Sponsor : Bobby May

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Date: 10/31/2019 5:09:00 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poem, Subimal :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/30/2019 9:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement
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