Subimal Sinha-Roy Poet Limerick

Achieving the Aim

I knew my Halloween candy he ate,
my dear sweet brother, him I’d never hate.
His fancy candy trouser
I’d hide to serve as teaser,
my aim I’d achieve to see him irate. 


October 21, 2019
Syllable count : 10/10/7/7/10
Checked on howmanysyllables.com
Contest : If I Were Your Brother
Sponsor : Bobby May

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Anne-Lise Andresen October 31, 2019 at 5:09 AM - Congratulations on your winning poem, Subimal :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Bobby May October 30, 2019 at 9:15 AM Congratulations on your placement