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Aches and Pains

Everyone has aches and pains When getting older; who complains Depends, at times, on who refrains From doing all the kvetching.* For any sympathy one gains May dwindle if attention wanes With every detail one explains, The story always stretching. Each bemoaning thus unchains Annoyance as one’s patience drains Although what hopefully remains Is empathy worth fetching. *Yiddish word for complaining

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Date: 5/4/2021 8:21:00 AM
I have a friend who is constantly "kvetching" so I am going to have to use this word on her. Thank you for this one!
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Date: 4/30/2021 11:28:00 AM
The good news is that every ache and pain alerts you to the fact you are still alive! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 4/30/2021 4:54:00 AM
So true. Wisdom tells you everyone has reason to moan so we must restrain from kvetching. Always a pleasure to read your poetey, Ilene!
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Date: 4/29/2021 7:25:00 PM
I don't know. I complain a lot. But I'm a man. Well penned. Love the rhyme. Have a great day my friend.
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Date: 4/29/2021 2:55:00 PM
Made me smile, Ilene. I always love your rhymes. Hoping you are well.
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Date: 4/29/2021 2:15:00 PM
And there lies the problem Ilene, complain too much, sympathy wanes Too little nobody will take notice, A fantastic poem with lovely rhyme throughout, I believe real pain can be seen in a persons eyes, cheers David
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Date: 4/29/2021 1:40:00 PM
I have aches and pains... beats moaning about the weather from time to time i guess lol:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 4/29/2021 12:31:00 PM
Hello Ilene , yes we all have aches and pains. so true. Sometimes it last awhile. Or longer. No one wants aches and pain. enjoy your day my friend.
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