Acheing 2012

It was long since I had learnt to think about you. A kite showed us the path of heaven where we walked.
There was a blue sea; we bathed like birds. 

Climbing up trees and eating fruits we slept in the same dream. 
Shade, green leaves and air looked after us like good servants.
Our own nest was built.

But-
As soon as you stepped out, the sky grew black.
Now sun, moon and rain touch me in the dark house of my heart.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Agustin Avatar
March 14, 2024 at 1:23 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
John Avatar
September 8, 2017 at 1:36 AM
Evocative.
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