Gregory Richard Barden Poet Haiku

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Ache of Autumn

~   fall
life aches
    for much more


burnt umber
       forest
    floor


       leaves
daubing
    autumn's breast


colors drift
       yearning
    rest


       bright
shrouding
    aptly dressed   ~






~ 1st Place ~  in the "Haiku 1-2-3 Or 3-2-1" Poetry Contest, Charles Messina, Judge & Sponsor

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Eve Roper October 10, 2018 at 9:21 PM Back with congratulations on your win. <3 Gregory Richard Barden October 30, 2018 at 3:40 AM You are too kind, Eve - thank you so much! :-) <3

Andrea Dietrich October 10, 2018 at 5:58 PM cool image you put with it too Gregory Richard Barden October 30, 2018 at 3:40 AM Thanks, Andrea! :-)

Andrea Dietrich October 10, 2018 at 5:58 PM wonderful win, my friend . Big congratulations Gregory Richard Barden October 30, 2018 at 3:40 AM Thank you very much, Andrea - blessings! :-)

Kim Rodrigues October 10, 2018 at 5:58 AM Congrats, Poet Greg, on your win! Gregory Richard Barden October 30, 2018 at 3:40 AM Thanks so very much, Dear Kim! :-) <3

Joanna Daniel October 9, 2018 at 10:17 PM I knew you would win, Greg, my hearty congratulations:) Gregory Richard Barden October 30, 2018 at 3:39 AM You are very kind, Jo ... and my lucky charm, it seems! Blessings and thanks, Dear Poet! :-) <3

Jan Allison October 9, 2018 at 4:07 PM beautifully penned string of haiku Greg, Many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx Gregory Richard Barden October 30, 2018 at 3:39 AM Many kind thank you's to you, Jan - blessings! :-) <3

Anne-Lise Andresen October 9, 2018 at 11:53 AM - Congratulations on your great haiku, Gregory :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Gregory Richard Barden October 30, 2018 at 3:38 AM Thank you so very much, Anne-Lise - blessings to you, Friend! :-) <3

Anisha Dutta October 9, 2018 at 11:52 AM EXCELLENT. Congrats to win top. Gregory Richard Barden October 30, 2018 at 3:37 AM Many thanks to you, Anisha - blessings! :-) <3

Line Gauthier October 9, 2018 at 11:30 AM Beautiful sequence, Gregory. Congrats on your most deserving gold medal win. Gregory Richard Barden October 30, 2018 at 3:37 AM Thank you so much, Dear Line! :-) <3

Warren Doll October 9, 2018 at 10:07 AM Congratulations on your first place win, Gregory. Well deserved. ~Warren Gregory Richard Barden October 30, 2018 at 3:37 AM That's very kind of you, Warren, thanks so much! :-)

Charles Messina October 9, 2018 at 8:48 AM Greg, is there any kind of poetry that you can't write. This is amazing! Thanks for entering my contest and for mastering this new form I invented. Congratulations on your 1st place win. Blessings ~Charlie Gregory Richard Barden October 30, 2018 at 3:36 AM Just lucky, Charlie! Thank you so much for my placement - it is an honor, quite humbling, to be on a list with such wonderful writers - blessings, my friend! :-)

Eve Roper September 15, 2018 at 7:31 PM Very well done, Greg, your talent is so amazing.. good luck in the contest. ~`* Hugs Eve Gregory Richard Barden September 19, 2018 at 2:48 AM You are too kind, Eve, but I so appreciate your wonderful comments! Blessings! :-) <3

Kim Rodrigues September 14, 2018 at 9:29 PM So pretty! Gregory Richard Barden September 19, 2018 at 2:48 AM Thank you, Kim! :-) <3

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart September 14, 2018 at 7:57 AM Beautifully done dear poet! A winner for sure :)) my best to you my friend! xomo <3 Gregory Richard Barden September 19, 2018 at 2:46 AM Thank you so much, Dear Mo ... so appreciated! :-) <3

Line Gauthier September 14, 2018 at 6:21 AM Lovely, Gregory. Gregory Richard Barden September 19, 2018 at 2:46 AM Thank you so much, Line! :-)

Winged Warrior September 14, 2018 at 5:45 AM Beautiful strings of Charlieku's lol Gregory...sure to win...L&L...^WW^ Gregory Richard Barden September 19, 2018 at 2:46 AM Thank you very much, ^WW^ - this was a fun write! :-)