Ach Toe B-R-R-R

There was a girl on the Isle of Man
Freezing her buttocks off in the can
There was no one to care
If she let off hot air
So toasting toes are now, "Owed to Jan"!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Devonshire Avatar
October 3, 2019 at 2:05 PM
Can't decide which fate is worse -- the freezing bathroom or the hot air. So funny, Rico. I see Jan enjoyed it too! Hugs, carolyn
Leffanta Avatar
October 4, 2019 at 4:43 PM
Freezing bathrooms are an horror story no one writes about; why is that? Sadly, there are not enough beans to help warm toes in a freezing bathroom! Aloha! Rico
Canerdy Avatar
October 2, 2019 at 5:35 PM
LOL! Good one, Rico! Janice
Leffanta Avatar
October 4, 2019 at 4:41 PM
Mahalo, Janice! Aloha! Rico
Ball Avatar
October 2, 2019 at 12:24 PM
Too cute . This one really made me smile. Great Stuff. God Bless, JB
Leffanta Avatar
October 4, 2019 at 4:41 PM
Keep reading, and I'll get a laugh out of you, yet! Aloha! Rico
Dietrich Avatar
October 1, 2019 at 3:28 PM
I enjoyed this one, and seeing Jan's fun reply!
Leffanta Avatar
October 4, 2019 at 4:40 PM
Mahalo for reading and commenting, Andrea! Aloha! Rico
Allison Avatar
October 1, 2019 at 7:28 AM
Haha ha do you have a camera hidden in our houses lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Devonshire Avatar
October 3, 2019 at 2:06 PM
Maybe the hot air will melt the snow. Hmmm...
Leffanta Avatar
October 2, 2019 at 4:45 PM
Credit where credit is due! Ode to Jan has received international acclaim, most especially where winter snow has already fallen! Thank for clearing the air! Aloha! Rico
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