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Ace Cannons' Canon

ACE CANNONS' CANON Through the morning, shimmering with colors that wavering, fade from a desert where heat is a hue, and history's due cactus and trees, knotted and sparse, a portrait some mad god must'f bade into being, into the "Otherwise Sane"; set apart from the world, lived in by you dust lays 'pon the ground, puffs upwards with resentful complaint as my mount plods onwards towards some tumbled town Town? a few homes, in a land where grown men could grow faint weary, thirsty, sweat-soaked; riding, walking, falling, down down... town Ace Cannon's my name, should anyone ask you may have heard, or you may not at times that's quite a task as i'm found wherever battles are fought and those who stay behind are often quite dead they thought, or they didn't, or dint really mind that those men who pushed, cursed, threatened with lead disrespected ladies, dint tip their hat, just hawked and spat raped, robbed or rustled, or horsethieved from towns and thought to back down the good folks with that more often than not, were buried with smiles, 'stead o' frowns i'm a gunslinger, in the olde sense of the word a hard man, a good man, a gunman, driftin' along light as a feather, fast as a bird i enjoy playing, Guns' melodious song "abandon all hope,all ye who hear, with nary a sound to accompany fear. the blackbirds are singing, as i draw near; the tumbleweeds roll, as leather i'll clear" a few townsfolk stroll from home to store a few, even this early, stagger from saloons to squint as at last, i ride past houses, where happy people live poor knowing each other, when last year they dint a traveler, through beauty and badland worthy of trust, friend of strangers in need dangerous at times, yet loyal to brand the code of the west, that noblest breed a stranger, hatbrim pulled low, all dust and sweat a horse noble as Knighthood, and muscled in trailwornest tan this was "the West", that hadn't quite yet met the Man Ace Cannon -esquire-

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/7/2010 10:32:00 AM
A lyrical ballad that recovers the saxophone's mystic melody, and the reprise of history. Well done.
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Date: 2/6/2010 9:56:00 AM
Solomon, congratulations on your poem being featured this week. Sincerely, Moses
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Date: 2/2/2010 11:50:00 AM
Many congrats on your featured piece. Rgds Janette
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Date: 2/1/2010 1:49:00 PM
Many congratulations on your poetry being featured this week >> James
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Date: 2/1/2010 5:41:00 AM
Contrats to you on being featured by PoetrySoup this week. Keep pen and paper on hand & never say never! AR
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Date: 2/1/2010 4:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poetry this week Solomon. May you have many more. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/31/2010 5:45:00 PM
very nicely penned congrats on the feature poem!!
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Date: 1/31/2010 5:25:00 PM
Nice way to share this story. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Keep on writing! Wishing you continued success. Karen
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Date: 1/31/2010 3:01:00 PM
Solomon, I enjoyed the story and the way it was told. Very nice prose poetry. I think it would also fit the description of the poetry form: Cowboy, but I'm not sure. At any rate. I give it an "A" Smiles, Dane Ann
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Date: 1/15/2010 9:47:00 PM
Very nice poem...Enjoyed reading tonight...Marty
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Date: 1/14/2010 4:51:00 AM
I have enjoyed reading your excellent poetry today Solomon. May you have a wonderful day filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/13/2010 12:34:00 PM
Howdy, Ace. Enjoyed your western. About the "What is Love." A read of "The Naked Man" is probably prerequisite, but then you'll, I'm sorry to say, have to use your imagination. daver
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Date: 1/13/2010 10:52:00 AM
Was Ace a real person, Solomon? You sure bring his gunslinging days to life in this enjoyable write. Nice work! Love, Carolyn
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