Lin Lane Poet Rhyme

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Accolades To the Moon

Since risen dawn, clouds have been drifting in,
shifting their shapes, swimming above the sea.
There seems to be a whale waving her dorsal fin
My accolades to the moon's power sung in apogee

There are tiny rivulets where starfish cannot hide
Sea worms wiggling, trying to inch their way home
Nothing escapes the hastened withdrawal of low tide
leaving treasures to discover on this morning as I roam

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Regina Mcintosh May 5, 2023 at 1:53 AM As beautiful as your heart. God bless you always my kind friend. Love, Gina Lin Lane May 5, 2023 at 2:07 AM How gracious are your comments, Gina. Kindness seeks its own, and so your kindness is returned twofold. Thank you.

John Lawless May 4, 2023 at 3:26 PM all that's missing is the lone set of footprints. Beautifully written Lin Lin Lane May 4, 2023 at 3:59 PM Thank you, John. If I could've added them, I would've. Nice thought and thanks so much for liking this one.

Ann Foster May 4, 2023 at 2:43 PM What a lovely place to roam from your picture. Well done. Love this right too. Ann Lin Lane May 4, 2023 at 4:00 PM Thank you, Ann. I'd love to spend early mornings doing that very thing.

Joanna Daniel May 4, 2023 at 9:08 AM Brilliance shines through, Lin:) Lin Lane May 4, 2023 at 9:13 AM Such a kind comment, and appreciated, Jo.

Jan Allison May 4, 2023 at 7:55 AM Lin what beautiful imagery and once again the picture is perfect. Write on my friend:-) hugs Jan xx Had to smile at the starfish line as Jack Horne sent me a necklace which Carolyn Devonshire had gifted to his mum it arrived yesterday in the post - His mum does not wear it and Jack thought Carolyn would approve if he sent it to me. I feel so blessed with the wonderful friends i have on the site:-) hugs jan xx Lin Lane May 4, 2023 at 9:12 AM We've been friends for almost 8 years. That's longer than I've been friends with some people I see face to face. That kind of friendship lasts forever. Jan Allison May 4, 2023 at 8:13 AM I was so touched Jack wanted me to have his mum's necklace, he said its what Carolyn would have loved. He is an amazing son looking after his mum with end of life dementia care. The dragonfly necklace you made me is a cherished piece too Lin:-) hugs jan xx Lin Lane May 4, 2023 at 8:00 AM How very sweet of Jack to send it along to you. I know you appreciated the jewelry I made and sent to you long ago. Thank you for another great comment, Jan.