Accolades To the Moon

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Since risen dawn, clouds have been drifting in, shifting their shapes, swimming above the sea. There seems to be a whale waving her dorsal fin My accolades to the moon's power sung in apogee There are tiny rivulets where starfish cannot hide Sea worms wiggling, trying to inch their way home Nothing escapes the hastened withdrawal of low tide leaving treasures to discover on this morning as I roam

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Regina Mcintosh

Date: 5/5/2023 1:53:00 AM

As beautiful as your heart. God bless you always my kind friend. Love, Gina

Lin Lane
Date: 5/5/2023 2:07:00 AM

How gracious are your comments, Gina. Kindness seeks its own, and so your kindness is returned twofold. Thank you.

John Lawless

Date: 5/4/2023 3:26:00 PM

all that's missing is the lone set of footprints. Beautifully written Lin

Lin Lane
Date: 5/4/2023 3:59:00 PM

Thank you, John. If I could've added them, I would've. Nice thought and thanks so much for liking this one.

Ann Foster

Date: 5/4/2023 2:43:00 PM

What a lovely place to roam from your picture. Well done. Love this right too. Ann

Lin Lane
Date: 5/4/2023 4:00:00 PM

Thank you, Ann. I'd love to spend early mornings doing that very thing.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 5/4/2023 9:08:00 AM

Brilliance shines through, Lin:)

Lin Lane
Date: 5/4/2023 9:13:00 AM

Such a kind comment, and appreciated, Jo.

Jan Allison

Date: 5/4/2023 7:55:00 AM

Lin what beautiful imagery and once again the picture is perfect. Write on my friend:-) hugs Jan xx Had to smile at the starfish line as Jack Horne sent me a necklace which Carolyn Devonshire had gifted to his mum it arrived yesterday in the post - His mum does not wear it and Jack thought Carolyn would approve if he sent it to me. I feel so blessed with the wonderful friends i have on the site:-) hugs jan xx

Lin Lane
Date: 5/4/2023 9:12:00 AM

We've been friends for almost 8 years. That's longer than I've been friends with some people I see face to face. That kind of friendship lasts forever.

Jan Allison
Date: 5/4/2023 8:13:00 AM

I was so touched Jack wanted me to have his mum's necklace, he said its what Carolyn would have loved. He is an amazing son looking after his mum with end of life dementia care. The dragonfly necklace you made me is a cherished piece too Lin:-) hugs jan xx

Lin Lane
Date: 5/4/2023 8:00:00 AM

How very sweet of Jack to send it along to you. I know you appreciated the jewelry I made and sent to you long ago. Thank you for another great comment, Jan.