Accident

The old man stares 
past the glares as
she dares coaxing.

For Rick's Than-Bauk contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
November 18, 2011 at 6:09 AM
Congratulations on your placement in ^Rick's "Than-Bauk" contest Charles. Love, Carol
Maverick Avatar
November 17, 2011 at 11:57 AM
Congratulations on the win here Charles, (well done)
Mehta Avatar
November 17, 2011 at 2:08 AM
Congratulations this wonderful win in the contest of Rick, Charles
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November 16, 2011 at 7:02 PM
Congrats on your poem, Charles,, Thank you for sharing your wonderful poem. Enjoyed stopping by this evening. Have yourself a great and wonderful night,..always ;-) p.d.
Johnson Avatar
November 16, 2011 at 6:59 PM
Congratulations Charles.
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November 16, 2011 at 5:15 PM
This win was NOT accident, dear Charles! Congratulations on your first place. Best, Iolanda
Dietrich Avatar
November 16, 2011 at 2:07 PM
WAy to go, Charles. congrats on your TOP spot!
Richards Avatar
November 16, 2011 at 1:34 PM
Congratulations Charles, on this clever poem! Well done!
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November 16, 2011 at 1:24 PM
Love your poem, Charles. Congratulations on your first-place win in Rick's contest! Hope you have a happy Thanksgiving. Love, Carolyn
Song Avatar
November 16, 2011 at 1:23 PM
The Grand Champion of one of the hardest forms=than bauk....this is not a small thing, Charles. Congrats. Gwendolen
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