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When I bent over your cheeks I felt collapsed inside Looking into your features Your face was sealike And my heart is shedding tears Drop by drop Little by little Changing the look of the frills And before circles are complete I settled myself by you As I might be.. Poem by/ Hassan Mohammed Al-Emrany Egypt, Minia, Bani Omran

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Rob Levasseur

Date: 12/24/2020 12:30:00 PM

I was taken aback by the first line, thinking of something entirely different. Very nicely done, though I would consider clarifying the first line for the readers who might think of another image to come to mind.

Hassan Mohammed Alemrany
Date: 12/24/2020 6:37:00 PM

Thank you for your kind feelings. The first line symbolises the state of determination to realise one's identity through challenges