Acceptance Conquest

Gone now is the despair of separation angst
By faith, I'm relieved from great loss-bondage.
                          God’s grace prevails
                            assuring hope!

My mother’s flight to immortality smote me  
left me grieving, yet momentarily.  
Though pangs of missing her engulf my heart
I’m soothed by her sweet memories of love’s fullness.

          Mom, you’re cheering me always, right?
         … as among witnesses* there up???

                          Truth accepted…
                            We’ll surely meet!

*Hebrew 12:1 ...We also are compassed about with so great a cloud of witnesses...

June 27, 2018
2nd place, "Fragmented Verse" Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Broken Wings - Dear Heart; judged on 7/23/2018.

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Date: 7/25/2018 2:10:00 PM
Beata, congratulations on your win in my contest. I have also lost my mother so I know this pain w3ll
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Beata Agustin
Date: 7/27/2018 1:33:00 AM
Praise God for the congratulations and comments. Thanks for the privilege of being a part in your sponsored contest where I learn a lot. Thanks for empathizing... we thank God for our moms. God bless you.
Date: 7/25/2018 8:04:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. This one hit me as about mother. Well done!
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Beata Agustin
Date: 7/27/2018 1:35:00 AM
Praise God.Thanks so much for your kind comments. God bless you.
Date: 7/23/2018 1:12:00 PM
Very lovely sentiments that welcome warm memories. Brilliantly written! Congratulations Beata. Very nice to meet you. Aloha, Connie ; )
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Beata Agustin
Date: 7/23/2018 9:26:00 PM
Praise God. Thanks so much for your comments. Likewise for the warm welcome greetings, Connie.
Date: 6/27/2018 12:33:00 AM
Positive, inspiration.. yet also kind of sad!
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