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Acceptance

Standing there on that crisp, sunny, day, the wind blew, the pain went away. For once, oh once, she didn't feel. Because at this time, she decided to kneel. Her heart, filled with so much pain, all shriveled up like an old, little, stain. She gave it to him. She gave him her heart. She felt the forgiveness soak into her, from the very start. This was the time in her life when she actually felt loved. So, she smiled and looked above. She knew he was watching and guiding her every step of the way, and so she accepted Jesus Christ on that crisp, sunny, day.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/28/2009 9:36:00 AM
wow this is amazing, wonderful write
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Date: 4/6/2009 9:22:00 AM
Excellent conclusion on this one, with strong pacing throughout, Serenity! Images of faith prove difficult to express; you reach out with clarity and conscious warmth. Great pen! Warm regards, John.
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Date: 3/26/2009 8:22:00 AM
awe now this one is the best out of all (em) no joke and keep up the work your doing great sooo just that i mind tho and its the truth
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Date: 3/26/2009 8:17:00 AM
And for every sinner that's saved the angels rejoice in heaven. Halellujah. Great write. God bless. Leon
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