Acceptance

Denial, anger, bargaining, and depression
Barely behind me, I pick up pieces
                          and carry on
                            as best I can

It took ages to process, I’ll never forget
Just learn to respect the cycle of life
Embrace its inevitability
Appreciate the miracle of fleeting time

        Is it change inescapable
        That makes departed love most dear?

                          Divine treasure
                            Precarious



AP: Honorable Mention 2025

Submitted on June 28, 2018 for contest FRAGMENTED VERSE sponsored by BROKEN WINGS- DEAR HEART -  RANKED 2ND
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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La France Avatar
July 25, 2018 at 2:09 PM
Line, congratulations on your win in my contest. Learning to accept the cycle of life is so difficult.
Gauthier Avatar
July 25, 2018 at 2:20 PM
Thank you so much, It was an awesome contest and the specified form was very elegant. Line xx
Gentry Avatar
July 25, 2018 at 8:02 AM
Congratulations on your win. "...miracle of fleeting life." Excellent phrase.
Gauthier Avatar
July 25, 2018 at 2:21 PM
Thank you so much, Susan, for your most appreciated visit and comment.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
July 24, 2018 at 2:11 AM
Congratulations, Line o your win. Very touching.
Gauthier Avatar
July 24, 2018 at 6:49 AM
Thank you, Subimal, for your much appreciated visit and comment.
Fisher Avatar
July 23, 2018 at 6:53 PM
Congratulations. Beautiful.
Gauthier Avatar
July 23, 2018 at 6:56 PM
Thank you, Haley, for your much appreciated visit and comment.
Haight Avatar
July 23, 2018 at 6:27 PM
Line, you have wonderfully expressed this 'acceptance' we all have to honor during our lifetimes. Congratulations on your podium win. Hugs, Sandra
Gauthier Avatar
July 23, 2018 at 6:56 PM
Thank you so much, Sandra. Most appreciated.
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 23, 2018 at 1:09 PM
This poem expresses so beautifully the acceptance we all need to reach to heal. Congratulations on your wonderful win Line! : )
Gauthier Avatar
July 23, 2018 at 2:50 PM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Connie.
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