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Acceptance

Denial, anger, bargaining, and depression Barely behind me, I pick up pieces and carry on as best I can It took ages to process, I’ll never forget Just learn to respect the cycle of life Embrace its inevitability Appreciate the miracle of fleeting time Is it change inescapable That makes departed love most dear? Divine treasure Precarious Submitted on June 28, 2018 for contest FRAGMENTED VERSE sponsored by BROKEN WINGS- DEAR HEART - RANKED 2ND

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Date: 7/25/2018 2:09:00 PM
Line, congratulations on your win in my contest. Learning to accept the cycle of life is so difficult.
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Date: 7/25/2018 2:20:00 PM
Thank you so much, It was an awesome contest and the specified form was very elegant. Line xx
Date: 7/25/2018 8:02:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. "...miracle of fleeting life." Excellent phrase.
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Date: 7/25/2018 2:21:00 PM
Thank you so much, Susan, for your most appreciated visit and comment.
Date: 7/24/2018 2:11:00 AM
Congratulations, Line o your win. Very touching.
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Date: 7/24/2018 6:49:00 AM
Thank you, Subimal, for your much appreciated visit and comment.
Date: 7/23/2018 6:53:00 PM
Congratulations. Beautiful.
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Date: 7/23/2018 6:56:00 PM
Thank you, Haley, for your much appreciated visit and comment.
Date: 7/23/2018 6:27:00 PM
Line, you have wonderfully expressed this 'acceptance' we all have to honor during our lifetimes. Congratulations on your podium win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 7/23/2018 6:56:00 PM
Thank you so much, Sandra. Most appreciated.
Date: 7/23/2018 1:09:00 PM
This poem expresses so beautifully the acceptance we all need to reach to heal. Congratulations on your wonderful win Line! : )
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Date: 7/23/2018 2:50:00 PM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Connie.

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