Academic Confessions

Sometimes when the calypso music explodes
Shards of memories glistening with my pain
My heart like a rhumba box sits silent again
Where slow surfs lap granite doors, genius erodes
The barriers that dreams could stream and rise
Like sprays fogless flowering the coastal skies.

And as academics meander through misty thoughts
Turning to me, inviting my precision of words
I am in the web of comparisons caught, herds
Of histories shepherdless now in stagnant paths
Tremble in the shivering winds of changes here
I represent the hopes anchored in ancient fear.

My education did not come the common way
But from libraries and borrowed books I took
The knowledge that in high schools would hook
No test, using baitless syllabus to stairs the day
Upward from ghetto streets and gang embrace
Scholared by ambition, I get my college place.

I am a kite today, with my string grounded still
In sugarcane fields of happiness, loud streets
Where sellers hawk their wares and love meets
Twinkling eyes, signals to a secret fruiting hill
Where school-less days I set my mind to change
The arguments that listed you and I as strange.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 4/8/2009 5:25:00 PM
I love the twists of language and words - Such originality of phrases - as in secret fruiting hill and suing baitless syllabus to stairs...I could list many more. Very well done
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Date: 4/8/2009 12:47:00 AM
Thank you for your welcome blog comments today L'nass.Rgds Brian
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Date: 4/7/2009 12:34:00 PM
I am a kite today-- painting words beautifully with your keys I loved this write
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Date: 4/7/2009 8:37:00 AM
the last line ... surely is my fav! your write here is brilliant! your knowledge from the library was worth it my friend! ~ Arany
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Date: 4/7/2009 7:47:00 AM
Oh my gosh! I love the last verse...Your imagery makes me fell like I've been where you've been, and felt the ocean sprays. You are an amazing poet! Thank you for sharing and for reading and commenting on my poetry as well. You flatter me. ~Trudy
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Date: 4/7/2009 7:39:00 AM
your good thank you for your comment i like the poem you put there to
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