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Acacia

Acacia Trees

We are lost in the fog rolling over river waves, intoxicated with waters music. 
I can see you only, and you can see only me,
while passion between us turns into endless blue.
*
In a flash, I can see
yours jump into the hug of insectoid past.
Dreaming fingers of mine and my long dark hair.
You are chasing your shadow while dreaming of me.
You will catch her only on the horizon.
*
The great wall protecting my soul is collapsing,
hit by your lips and words.
Frightened, my soul emerges out.
*
My flying words towards you are frozen
by dead bodies.
Our shoes are in love with the path
through the cemetery acacia.
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 9/12/2025 6:39:00 AM
Couldn't get any better. Its amazing how it flowed so brilliantly with your unique style and exquisite lines to boot. The second stanza especially..
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Date: 8/22/2025 4:16:00 PM
peaceful, profound, pristine poems. peace. please see or comment mine if can do. be well .keep up good work.
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Maximilian G. Wolf
Date: 8/23/2025 5:20:00 AM
Daniel, Thank you for supporting me. I'll read your work for sure. Have a nice day. ~Max
Date: 1/10/2022 7:01:00 PM
your poem is full of emotion and detail. I liked this very much. thanks for your comment on my poem also.
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Maximilian G. Wolf
Date: 1/11/2022 4:41:00 AM
Karen, Appreciate for support. Have a nice day! ~Max
Date: 11/3/2021 2:34:00 PM
Interesting lines penned in this one. No sure exactly of what you are speaking but it has good emotion and creativity. Your visit to my page was encouraging. Sara
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Maximilian G. Wolf
Date: 11/4/2021 5:00:00 PM
Sara, The poem is about a stroll with the love of my life alongside the acacia tree line. At that very moment, we were in a critical life path situation. I wrote the poem a few days after the walk back in 1993. ~Max ------- P.S. I'm happy that my visit to your page is encouraging.
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