Abyss

in a far off place
a land full of dreams
wonder approaches

although asleep
I can taste the sweetness
on my lips

if I move
it slips into the abyss
of darkness
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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October 18, 2010 at 7:28 PM
Intriguing, loved this dream write.
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