Abyss

A chasm divides us from spiritual realms Bringing inner conflict as we spiral into chaos Yet the divide gets deeper with time Shadowy preachers spew twisted sermons Steep is the fall from grace 12-13-2021

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Eshe Benson

Date: 2/8/2022 3:04:00 AM

Nice work. May God save us all from twisted sermons

Heidi Sands

Date: 1/2/2022 6:00:00 AM

Excellent poem. A fave for me :)

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 12/30/2021 5:00:00 PM

Very poignant Acrostic....the abyss seems to become deeper and deeper through time. Wishing you a very Happy New Year! Paulette

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/25/2021 10:36:00 PM

wow, one of my favorite reads of the night. An acrostic done really well.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 12/22/2021 2:27:00 PM

Yes indeed, sometimes the soul falls deep into the chasms of life, only God can resurrect that, nicely penned dear Joseph. Merry Christmas be well, and prosper, xo

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 12/21/2021 10:57:00 AM

A profound view of our current events my friend. Well written. Blessings xxoo

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/21/2021 6:54:00 AM

- A wonderful poem, Joseph :) - I wish you a lovely Christmas and a blessed New Year :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Brandy Nicole

Date: 12/15/2021 8:13:00 PM

Yes, there are many false teachers out there. Your thoughts hold so much truth. This is so beautifully written and presented. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy

Jan Allison

Date: 12/14/2021 2:40:00 PM

wise words indeed Joseph, hugs Jan xx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 12/14/2021 11:35:00 AM

It's certainly a long way down for many. Well composed Joseph, I hope you are well. Tom

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 12/14/2021 6:05:00 AM

It's taking place all over the world. Wonderful write.