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Abusive Love

she didnt want to live in fear so the smoke filled up the air from the gun that she just shot as the bullet pierced his heart they say love hurts and it is true but when someone turns on you and your life is flipped around on the day that you have found the man you thought would always care left you with bruises everywhere as his fists came at full force leaving you to scream and toss knowing that his strength will grow at each punch that he will throw as your left with no defense and he takes away your strength you lose control of your whole world when he turns on his little girl that is small and scared to death as strong holds take away her breath you watch in horror and decide no one will take away her life grabbing the gun you crawl around and drop that a--hole to the ground

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 5/7/2014 10:08:00 PM
What a poem! This is really good. I'm really paying attention to your poems. I must say about this one: Admirable. Your channel has a lot of poems that i must read!!!
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Date: 5/7/2014 1:46:00 PM
ROBIN, Congratulations!!! Stopping by to enjoy last night's winning poems --once again. Thank you for supporting my tiny contest... :) LINDA
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Date: 5/7/2014 9:47:00 AM
Congratulation on the fine win, thanks for sharing this lovely poem, robin
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Date: 10/13/2013 11:36:00 PM
justice done....i am touched by this poem..god bless
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Date: 10/2/2013 4:39:00 PM
too much hurt in the world. Sometimes there is only one answer. No one ever deserved to be abused.
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Date: 9/24/2013 12:13:00 PM
i agree some people donty deserve to be in a relationship love the verse and topic thanks for kind words on mine davidscott
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Date: 9/22/2013 9:07:00 PM
wow......your poetry runs the table for variety.....I can't picture you writing this. The violence seems so real. keep writing.....you have a fan in me.
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Date: 9/21/2013 8:08:00 PM
Nice work Robin, I don't know how you found my poem, but thank you for stopping by and blessing me with a comment. God Bless...
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Date: 9/21/2013 6:27:00 AM
We go into survival mode for protection & love. It's our defense mechanism when faced with a traumatic situation. Powerful write Robin!!! A courageous strength in words thankyou for sharing<3 cherie
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Date: 9/19/2013 4:51:00 PM
The instinct to protect those you love can be enormous! Overwhelming!
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