Abuser

Roses are red Violets are blue These colors mar my face Wait till your friends view! *For Susan’s contest

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Jack Horne

Date: 3/26/2012 8:48:00 AM

Powerful piece, Carolyn - and so scary to think such things happen

Joe Maverick

Date: 3/16/2012 12:23:00 AM

Many scenes come to my imagination Carolyn in this short yet powerfull, thought provoker of a write; hope you are keeping strong and wishing you a top place with this today..)

Harry Horsman

Date: 3/13/2012 3:54:00 PM

Oh this is different Carolyn, like it a lot. harry

M.I.A .

Date: 3/12/2012 8:59:00 PM

ouch! >,<

Russell Sivey

Date: 3/12/2012 5:39:00 PM

Wow, what a way to tell one of abuse in the home! That's so sad really, that this stuff really does happen, I hate it when this abuse occurs! This should never ever happen! I really enjoyed the way you brought this abuse into light! "Wait till your friends view!" Oh what power that line really has! I love your poem immensely! Great Work!!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/12/2012 4:19:00 PM

Like it alot Carilyn, I have one to. - Luck to you in contest. oxox Anne-Lise