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Abuser

Roses are red
Violets are blue
These colors mar my face
Wait till your friends view!



*For Susan’s contest

sadroses are redrhyme

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Jack Horne

March 26, 2012 at 8:48 AM

Powerful piece, Carolyn - and so scary to think such things happen

Joe Maverick

March 16, 2012 at 12:23 AM

Many scenes come to my imagination Carolyn in this short yet powerfull, thought provoker of a write; hope you are keeping strong and wishing you a top place with this today..)

Harry Horsman

March 13, 2012 at 3:54 PM

Oh this is different Carolyn, like it a lot. harry

M.I.A .

March 12, 2012 at 8:59 PM

ouch! >,<

Russell Sivey

March 12, 2012 at 5:39 PM

Wow, what a way to tell one of abuse in the home! That's so sad really, that this stuff really does happen, I hate it when this abuse occurs! This should never ever happen! I really enjoyed the way you brought this abuse into light! "Wait till your friends view!" Oh what power that line really has! I love your poem immensely! Great Work!!