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ABUSE OF VALENTINE SPIRIT

FROM MY ROOFTOP GARDEN, 12 FEBRUARY 2017, MY PHOTO, ©

Abuse of Valentine Spirit

There was once a good man of certain charm

Who never wished any lady to harm

But he flirted every day

No, couldn't to any say

Finally found himslef alone the bum!





© Demetrios Trifiatis
     12 February 2017



10-10-7-7-10
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Krutsinger Avatar
April 26, 2020 at 9:52 PM
He earned his solitude.
Nair Avatar
April 19, 2018 at 12:17 AM
Beautiful sir
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 3, 2017 at 5:29 AM
The bum...I love it! Have a great week!
Trifiatis Avatar
July 3, 2017 at 5:37 AM
Connie, my dear what on earth are doing that back in time? Is it Valentine's and I do not know of it? Thank you my friend!
Gupta Avatar
February 12, 2017 at 10:08 AM
Wonderful limerick ... Lovely humour ...
Trifiatis Avatar
February 12, 2017 at 12:10 PM
Thank you my friend, Probir!
Andresen Avatar
February 12, 2017 at 9:42 AM
- All allure to no avail ... how sad :)) - Well done ... a 7 - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Trifiatis Avatar
February 12, 2017 at 12:11 PM
Thank you my dearest friend, Anne-Lise for your visit and comment! Hugs!
Spagnola Avatar
February 12, 2017 at 8:33 AM
Sweet 7+ my friend :) lmao!! You write with such certainty and valition!!! Oh I have missed you crafting wisdom in so many different forms....I'm so glad to have a chance to get back on the forum and enjoy what I have been missing..well your art for sure....peace, Jill
Trifiatis Avatar
February 12, 2017 at 12:12 PM
I am so delighted to see you back my dearest, Jill! I hope you will stay with us now! Thank you!
Godwin Avatar
February 12, 2017 at 3:22 AM
Look what he manifested! and he didn't even realize what he was doing. Oh my! Yes, that bum! I had a good time ... CayCay
Trifiatis Avatar
February 12, 2017 at 12:14 PM
Unfortunately there are some like him that spoil Valentine's day dear, CayCay. Hope you have the best Valentine ever! Thank you!
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