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ABUSE OF VALENTINE SPIRIT

FROM MY ROOFTOP GARDEN, 12 FEBRUARY 2017, MY PHOTO, ©

There was once a good man of certain charm Who never wished any lady to harm But he flirted every day No, couldn't to any say Finally found himslef alone the bum! © Demetrios Trifiatis 12 February 2017 10-10-7-7-10

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 4/26/2020 9:52:00 PM

He earned his solitude.

Sneha Nair

Date: 4/19/2018 12:17:00 AM

Beautiful sir

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/3/2017 5:29:00 AM

The bum...I love it! Have a great week!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 7/3/2017 5:37:00 AM

Connie, my dear what on earth are doing that back in time? Is it Valentine's and I do not know of it? Thank you my friend!

Probir Gupta

Date: 2/12/2017 10:08:00 AM

Wonderful limerick ... Lovely humour ...

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 2/12/2017 12:10:00 PM

Thank you my friend, Probir!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/12/2017 9:42:00 AM

- All allure to no avail ... how sad :)) - Well done ... a 7 - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 2/12/2017 12:11:00 PM

Thank you my dearest friend, Anne-Lise for your visit and comment! Hugs!

Jill Spagnola

Date: 2/12/2017 8:33:00 AM

Sweet 7+ my friend :) lmao!! You write with such certainty and valition!!! Oh I have missed you crafting wisdom in so many different forms....I'm so glad to have a chance to get back on the forum and enjoy what I have been missing..well your art for sure....peace, Jill

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 2/12/2017 12:12:00 PM

I am so delighted to see you back my dearest, Jill! I hope you will stay with us now! Thank you!

CayCay Jennings

Date: 2/12/2017 3:22:00 AM

Look what he manifested! and he didn't even realize what he was doing. Oh my! Yes, that bum! I had a good time ... CayCay

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 2/12/2017 12:14:00 PM

Unfortunately there are some like him that spoil Valentine's day dear, CayCay. Hope you have the best Valentine ever! Thank you!