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Abuse From Some Beach

. He was a kind of person that was good not to know He'd mistreat all women and his wife especially so She would hold her tongue and dream some beach, some beach some beach__________somewhere Drinking Margaritas and watching a beautiful scene Some beach, some beach, Drinking Margaritas Somewhere Sponsor: Black Eyed Susan Contest: Abuse Written: 5/10/2013 There is a new song out or at least I have not heard it until lately..So this is using their same play on words..It is not orginal and I can't take full credit..Sara

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Karen Anglesey

Date: 5/19/2013 8:31:00 PM

Your take on abuse is elegant. I hope she stays on that beach drinking margaritas. Sadly the 'I'm sorry" tends to woo them back into it... Your poetry is divine.

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 5/12/2013 6:49:00 PM

Nicely done Sara. I've heard the song and you have done it justice. I hope you had a wonderful Mothers Day. Warm Smiles, Connie

Jack Horne

Date: 5/11/2013 2:37:00 PM

I don't know the song, but lovely write, Sara

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 5/11/2013 6:56:00 AM

Excellent. Sad but well penned. Tfs

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 5/11/2013 4:44:00 AM

Oh, yes! Any woman having a husband like him certainly will desire somewhere else to be: anywhere but with him! Sad but very well expressed poem!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/11/2013 12:31:00 AM

yes, I know exactly the song you mean. It goes well with this topic, Sara. I love the song and I enjoyed reading this.

Russell Sivey

Date: 5/10/2013 9:26:00 PM

Even if you didn't come up with it completely, you still have put together a tremendous write! I really enjoyed reading this delightful poem this evening! Oh, my contest results have been posted if you care to see where you placed in it, you did very well. I only placed 24 out of 50 poems and yours placed high! I thought you did excellent with it! What a lovely piece both of these poems are, Great Work!!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/10/2013 6:56:00 PM

Hello, Sara, I'm taking this moment to wish you an early Happy Mother's day. Just in case, I can't hang around the soup past Saturday Night. May you enjoy all the blessings a mother engraves in our hearts. About your poem: i like the sound of the poem, and the beach... thank you for sharing..~ LINDA