Home » Poems » Raul Moreno » Abundant Verse

Abundant Verse

Poetry implodes, Seeping onto blank pages: Gospel of my soul.

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 2/16/2010 3:21:00 PM

I love this Gospel Raul..it keeps me wanna read more..keep posting,We ll keep reading,,Charma

Iolanda Scripca

Date: 2/16/2010 12:22:00 AM

"Gospel of my soul." ...and what a beautiful Soul, Raul! As I wrote in one of my sad poems: "Implosion of rainbows will probably be The cause of my passing unknown and alone. When thrown overboard and deep into sea I'll finally return to my home long time gone..." Thank you for your comments. Love, Iolanda

Noel Villarosa

Date: 2/15/2010 10:20:00 PM

Unquestionable truth you have written here, Raul. A lovely read. Thank you for the excellent job in your contest of Seascapes, appreciate so much of judging me 5th place on the said contest. (^_^) Noel.

Skat A

Date: 2/15/2010 9:27:00 PM

WOW I LIKE THE WAY YOU VISUAL YOUR POETRY DEEP...JUST LIKE THE BIBLE HAS POWERFUL WORDS .GOOD COMPARE, I ENJOYED THE READ....I.T.

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 2/15/2010 9:15:00 PM

Lovely Raul, you fill your pages with amazing words. BG

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/15/2010 7:58:00 PM

Such wonderful gospels they are Raul.. always a joy to read and the different forms used in your expressive lines is ever impressive... another lovely contest ..thankxxx for the ever present challenge to extend our gifts and talents.. luv.. Linda-Marie

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 2/15/2010 5:37:00 PM

Raul, I like the use of implodes as opposed to explodes because it takes the reader inside your. And after the implosion occurs, you, all that you are and feel, your soul...seeps onto the pages. I enjoy your work when I visit to read. Smiles and love, Dane Ann

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/15/2010 4:48:00 PM

Great description of your work. Sara