Abstractive

It's not figuratively thinking but abstractive!
Avoiding over abstract. 
The road is clear.
The eyes within their limits 
See the appearances of things
& their expressions, figures.
An eye is a tool for seeing .
Like an eye, the brain is a tool for the mind
Who takes you to the door of the hidden treasure house
Never
Enter
That's its/his limit. 
The turn is for the upper, super, heart
When you say I you meant!
No seeing nor thinking
Taste.
Feel.
Sense of taste abnormally  
The words could not explain
Yet an abnormal taster knew what it is.
So not to speak of what words cannot hold.

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Date: 1/14/2024 6:38:00 PM
Perfect title for this win of a poem! I liked the line, “the brain is a tool for the mind.” Somwtimes we hunans get far too distracted by emotions as false beliefs or just plain wrong, thoughts. These can be very destructive for sure, Thank you,,,,Abdullah. Hope youur week is a wondermebnt Merci, Panagiota
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Abdullah Alhemaidy
Date: 1/15/2024 4:20:00 PM
Thank you very much :-)
Date: 1/14/2024 11:50:00 AM
This is very creative and quite profound.. nice to see you writing a bit longer and differently..
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Abdullah Alhemaidy
Date: 1/15/2024 4:19:00 PM
Thank you so much :-)
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