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Abstractive

It's not figuratively thinking but abstractive! Avoiding over abstract. The road is clear. The eyes within their limits See the appearances of things & their expressions, figures. An eye is a tool for seeing . Like an eye, the brain is a tool for the mind Who takes you to the door of the hidden treasure house Never Enter That's its/his limit. The turn is for the upper, super, heart When you say I you meant! No seeing nor thinking Taste. Feel. Sense of taste abnormally The words could not explain Yet an abnormal taster knew what it is. So not to speak of what words cannot hold.

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Date: 1/14/2024 6:38:00 PM
Perfect title for this win of a poem! I liked the line, “the brain is a tool for the mind.” Somwtimes we hunans get far too distracted by emotions as false beliefs or just plain wrong, thoughts. These can be very destructive for sure, Thank you,,,,Abdullah. Hope youur week is a wondermebnt Merci, Panagiota
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Abdullah Alhemaidy
Date: 1/15/2024 4:20:00 PM
Thank you very much :-)
Date: 1/14/2024 11:50:00 AM
This is very creative and quite profound.. nice to see you writing a bit longer and differently..
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Abdullah Alhemaidy
Date: 1/15/2024 4:19:00 PM
Thank you so much :-)
Date: 1/13/2024 3:42:00 PM
what an awesome stream of thoughts. The last two lines are powerful...'do not speak of what words cannot hold.' Wisdom.
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Abdullah Alhemaidy
Date: 1/15/2024 4:18:00 PM
Thank you very much :-)

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