Abstracted An Open Form

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NOTE::THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FORM VERSE using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' (intuitive cadence)& so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretatIon unique to the moment& changing according to mood is inherently variable.

ABSTRACTED

 an elegant
obsession
 transformed
 from the absence
 of light
beyond black
a
created complex
of smoothness
in
 surfaces
absorbed
by
reflected light
so
 hard to exploit

  a
 fascination
with luminosity's
potential
 to create
to juxtapose
&
 overwhelm
in swathes
of
the
normal

such
a
duality
of
the
delicate shadowed
then
 merge
to
 a free rein
in
 interpretation
of
notions

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