Abstract Minding

Veined whispers
   floating
Coursing freely
   releasing
Physically subjugated
   creating 
Cosmic reeling
   exploding
Tempestuous yearning
   drumming
Precariously woven
    flaming
Passionately related
    speaking
Metaphysical tounges
    wagging
Scientific lifelines
    swimming
Spiritual pathways
    howling
Refutable rituals
    shocking
Collective intensity 
    breathing
Abstract heartbeats
    bouncing
Seering unregrettable
    dreaming
Youthful precocious 
    swallowing
Backwards intelligence 
     submerging
Majestic depths
      professing
Realities perspective
      minding
Childlike curiosities
      reliving
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Hsi Avatar
August 10, 2017 at 2:37 AM
You did a wonderful job in your word and phrase associations. A very thought-provoking poem.
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August 15, 2017 at 3:34 PM
Thank you Thomas Hai.
White Avatar
April 19, 2017 at 8:05 AM
That's amazing Holly, and so good to see you back!
Bohto Avatar
April 19, 2017 at 9:20 AM
Thanks Darren. Its good to take the time to tinker with your passions.
Green Avatar
April 19, 2017 at 7:16 AM
Wonderfully done my friend. Definitely abstract and amazingly creative.
Bohto Avatar
April 19, 2017 at 9:22 AM
Thanks Chris. I'm dating someone who made a point of getting time together to write. His music. My abstract craziness.. lol
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April 19, 2017 at 2:55 AM
Holly, fabulous language in this captivating write, a seven for this masterpiece.
Bohto Avatar
April 19, 2017 at 9:23 AM
You're so kind Elizabeth. Thank you.
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