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Abstract Minding

Veined whispers
   floating
Coursing freely
   releasing
Physically subjugated
   creating 
Cosmic reeling
   exploding
Tempestuous yearning
   drumming
Precariously woven
    flaming
Passionately related
    speaking
Metaphysical tounges
    wagging
Scientific lifelines
    swimming
Spiritual pathways
    howling
Refutable rituals
    shocking
Collective intensity 
    breathing
Abstract heartbeats
    bouncing
Seering unregrettable
    dreaming
Youthful precocious 
    swallowing
Backwards intelligence 
     submerging
Majestic depths
      professing
Realities perspective
      minding
Childlike curiosities
      reliving

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Date: 8/10/2017 2:37:00 AM
You did a wonderful job in your word and phrase associations. A very thought-provoking poem.
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Holly Bohto
Date: 8/15/2017 3:34:00 PM
Thank you Thomas Hai.
Date: 4/19/2017 8:05:00 AM
That's amazing Holly, and so good to see you back!
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Holly Bohto
Date: 4/19/2017 9:20:00 AM
Thanks Darren. Its good to take the time to tinker with your passions.
Date: 4/19/2017 7:16:00 AM
Wonderfully done my friend. Definitely abstract and amazingly creative.
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Holly Bohto
Date: 4/19/2017 9:22:00 AM
Thanks Chris. I'm dating someone who made a point of getting time together to write. His music. My abstract craziness.. lol
Date: 4/19/2017 2:55:00 AM
Holly, fabulous language in this captivating write, a seven for this masterpiece.
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Holly Bohto
Date: 4/19/2017 9:23:00 AM
You're so kind Elizabeth. Thank you.

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