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I rambled once riding my bicycle
on a foggy day of winter.
The fog remained suspended long in the atmosphere
so impatient I to go out
for such a weather decades not seen.

Going farther and farther
excited seeing the veiled country
on a lonesome village road not seen before
the fogs dissipated,evening sun appeared
giving a pleasant apricity .

Countryside calm and gentle
sprawling Paddy fields brown with stubble
on both sides of the road quiet and peaceful
at the east extended to the foot of blue hill yonder,
a tree grove in the middle,
mist resting still at its foot,
a few clouds seen floating at the brae
top and above the idyllic blue hill.

There a moment I longed to sit
by the paddy field under the tree
branches wide spreading
with a maiden of my imagination long ago.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 4/24/2025 1:14:00 PM
This is wonderful work. I need to see if I have added you to my list of favorite poets yet.
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Date: 10/20/2020 12:09:00 AM
Fifty years is a long time..A long dream...and the place you pictured is a haven of bliss to be..Beautiful.
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