Verlena S. Walker Poet Verse

Absorbing Nature

ABSORBING NATURE
Jet stream shoots
Between two mountains cliffs
A breeze of honeysuckles I smell

Shooting stream 
Jet between two mountains
Cliffs of honeysuckles to enrich

Mountains cliffs
A stream jets a breeze felt
Honeysuckles smelt and landscape blooms

Waterfall 
Mountain parts water pours
A course emerge a spring to love
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Poet:               Verlena S. Walker
Date:               Penned October 26, 2014!
Contest Name: SOME FORM OF CRYSTALLINE

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Connie Marcum Wong November 9, 2014 at 5:09 AM A heavenly entry and winning poem Verlena! Big congrats on your win! Verlena S. Walker November 9, 2014 at 12:45 PM Thanks Connie for your awesome response. Verlena

Paul Callus November 8, 2014 at 3:36 PM Appealing to the senses, while the repetition produces the required result. Exaltation of nature and the love for it. Congrats on your win! // paul Verlena S. Walker November 8, 2014 at 3:49 PM Thanks for your super-awesome remarks Paul... Verlena

Kayod5 Kayode November 8, 2014 at 8:46 AM No doubt you are among the best talents here, I read this and became glued to it; congrats Verlena. Verlena S. Walker November 8, 2014 at 9:46 AM Thanks Kayods for your super-awesome response and your congratulations. Verlena

Brenda Meier-Hans November 8, 2014 at 8:19 AM Dropping back with my congratulations Verlena Verlena S. Walker November 8, 2014 at 9:47 AM Thanks Brenda for your congratulations. Verlena

Dr.Ram Mehta November 8, 2014 at 4:54 AM Absorbing piece of a poem, Verlena, congrats Verlena S. Walker November 8, 2014 at 9:48 AM Thanks Ram for your awesome response and your congratulations. Verlena

Richard Lamoureux November 7, 2014 at 12:46 PM I enjoyed your winning poem Verlena. Verlena S. Walker November 7, 2014 at 1:26 PM Thanks Richard... Verlena

Nette Onclaud November 7, 2014 at 2:25 AM how you mixed some images all throughout makes this work a special one, verlena... thank you for being part of my contest with warm congrats! Verlena S. Walker November 7, 2014 at 7:18 AM Thanks Nette for the consideration. Verlena

Andrea Dietrich November 6, 2014 at 10:06 PM The honeysuckles is a great added touch to this one. Congrats on your win. Verlena S. Walker November 7, 2014 at 7:19 AM Thanks for the congratulations Andrea... Verlena

Debra Squyres November 6, 2014 at 9:53 PM Unique from the others in the contest and wonderfully so !! Your visuals were spot on and I could picture a scene and smell my surroundings so easily. Congratulations on your win !! Verlena S. Walker November 7, 2014 at 7:19 AM Thanks Debbie for your awesome congratulations... Verlena

Maurice Yvonne November 6, 2014 at 8:37 PM Back to congratulate you on your win. Verlena S. Walker November 6, 2014 at 9:41 PM Thanks Maurice... Verlena

Jan Allison November 6, 2014 at 3:34 PM Dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs Jan xx Verlena S. Walker November 6, 2014 at 4:43 PM Thanks for the congratulations. Verlena

Maurice Yvonne October 28, 2014 at 5:34 PM This an extremely creative take on this challenge. It was my great pleasure to read this important write. Verlena S. Walker October 28, 2014 at 7:01 PM Thanks Maurice for your supportive remarks. Verlena

Justin Bordner October 27, 2014 at 8:57 PM A pulse jets a promise into mind, may ye not jettison love for pride...I really like how smartly you've taken control of the language to create a memorable spirit of joy Verlena. Verlena S. Walker October 27, 2014 at 9:06 PM Thanks Justin. I am the seeker of faith in search of a soulmate. Sending a smile, Verlena...

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty October 27, 2014 at 1:31 PM Nature emerging by phases, in a synchronous way "A breeze of honeysuckles"" Cliffs of honeysuckles" "Honeysuckles smelt" and" Landscape blooms" and then " "A course emerge a spring to love"You have not skipped details. So by petal by petal a flower blooms, in slow motion. Poets are never in hurry. An excellent piece...a spark of genius...LOVE VERLENA xxxxxxxx RAJAT Verlena S. Walker October 27, 2014 at 1:50 PM Thanks Rajat for your super-awesome response. Sending a smile and a hug, Verlena.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma October 27, 2014 at 8:45 AM Captivating write Verlena! Gl in contest! Verlena S. Walker October 27, 2014 at 12:48 PM Thanks Dr. Upma for your awesome remark... Verlena

Hija De La Luna October 27, 2014 at 5:05 AM i love this, Verlena! appeals to my senses Verlena S. Walker October 27, 2014 at 12:49 PM Thanks Hija for your super-awesome remark. Verlena

Ravi Sathasivam October 27, 2014 at 4:14 AM Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed. Tfs Verlena S. Walker October 27, 2014 at 12:50 PM Thanks Ravi for your supportive remarks. Verlena

Jan Allison October 27, 2014 at 3:34 AM Beautifully painted Verlenda - I adore honeysuckle and have it in my front garden. hugs Jan xx Verlena S. Walker October 27, 2014 at 12:54 PM Thanks Jan for your superlative remarks. Verlena

Dan Helppi October 26, 2014 at 7:47 PM Verlena, your poem reminds me of Wittier Alaska where my family enjoyed vacationing last summer. Verlena S. Walker October 26, 2014 at 11:07 PM Thanks Dan for your response. Appreciated... Verlena

Brenda Meier-Hans October 26, 2014 at 6:24 PM The beautiful smell of honeysuckle. Sounds wonderful Verlena Verlena S. Walker October 26, 2014 at 11:07 PM Thanks Brenda for you supportive response. Appreciated... Verlena