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Absorbing Nature

ABSORBING NATURE Jet stream shoots Between two mountains cliffs A breeze of honeysuckles I smell Shooting stream Jet between two mountains Cliffs of honeysuckles to enrich Mountains cliffs A stream jets a breeze felt Honeysuckles smelt and landscape blooms Waterfall Mountain parts water pours A course emerge a spring to love |______________________________________________________________________| Poet: Verlena S. Walker Date: Penned October 26, 2014! Contest Name: SOME FORM OF CRYSTALLINE

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 11/9/2014 5:09:00 AM

A heavenly entry and winning poem Verlena! Big congrats on your win!

Verlena S. Walker
Date: 11/9/2014 12:45:00 PM

Thanks Connie for your awesome response. Verlena

Paul Callus

Date: 11/8/2014 3:36:00 PM

Appealing to the senses, while the repetition produces the required result. Exaltation of nature and the love for it. Congrats on your win! // paul

Verlena S. Walker
Date: 11/8/2014 3:49:00 PM

Thanks for your super-awesome remarks Paul... Verlena

Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 11/8/2014 8:46:00 AM

No doubt you are among the best talents here, I read this and became glued to it; congrats Verlena.

Verlena S. Walker
Date: 11/8/2014 9:46:00 AM

Thanks Kayods for your super-awesome response and your congratulations. Verlena

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 11/8/2014 8:19:00 AM

Dropping back with my congratulations Verlena

Verlena S. Walker
Date: 11/8/2014 9:47:00 AM

Thanks Brenda for your congratulations. Verlena

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 11/8/2014 4:54:00 AM

Absorbing piece of a poem, Verlena, congrats

Verlena S. Walker
Date: 11/8/2014 9:48:00 AM

Thanks Ram for your awesome response and your congratulations. Verlena

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/7/2014 12:46:00 PM

I enjoyed your winning poem Verlena.

Verlena S. Walker
Date: 11/7/2014 1:26:00 PM

Thanks Richard... Verlena

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/7/2014 2:25:00 AM

how you mixed some images all throughout makes this work a special one, verlena... thank you for being part of my contest with warm congrats!

Verlena S. Walker
Date: 11/7/2014 7:18:00 AM

Thanks Nette for the consideration. Verlena

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/6/2014 10:06:00 PM

The honeysuckles is a great added touch to this one. Congrats on your win.

Verlena S. Walker
Date: 11/7/2014 7:19:00 AM

Thanks for the congratulations Andrea... Verlena

Debra Squyres

Date: 11/6/2014 9:53:00 PM

Unique from the others in the contest and wonderfully so !! Your visuals were spot on and I could picture a scene and smell my surroundings so easily. Congratulations on your win !!

Verlena S. Walker
Date: 11/7/2014 7:19:00 AM

Thanks Debbie for your awesome congratulations... Verlena

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 11/6/2014 8:37:00 PM

Back to congratulate you on your win.

Verlena S. Walker
Date: 11/6/2014 9:41:00 PM

Thanks Maurice... Verlena

Jan Allison

Date: 11/6/2014 3:34:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs Jan xx

Verlena S. Walker
Date: 11/6/2014 4:43:00 PM

Thanks for the congratulations. Verlena

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 10/28/2014 5:34:00 PM

This an extremely creative take on this challenge. It was my great pleasure to read this important write.

Verlena S. Walker
Date: 10/28/2014 7:01:00 PM

Thanks Maurice for your supportive remarks. Verlena

Justin Bordner

Date: 10/27/2014 8:57:00 PM

A pulse jets a promise into mind, may ye not jettison love for pride...I really like how smartly you've taken control of the language to create a memorable spirit of joy Verlena.

Verlena S. Walker
Date: 10/27/2014 9:06:00 PM

Thanks Justin. I am the seeker of faith in search of a soulmate. Sending a smile, Verlena...

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 10/27/2014 1:31:00 PM

Nature emerging by phases, in a synchronous way "A breeze of honeysuckles"" Cliffs of honeysuckles" "Honeysuckles smelt" and" Landscape blooms" and then " "A course emerge a spring to love"You have not skipped details. So by petal by petal a flower blooms, in slow motion. Poets are never in hurry. An excellent piece...a spark of genius...LOVE VERLENA xxxxxxxx RAJAT

Verlena S. Walker
Date: 10/27/2014 1:50:00 PM

Thanks Rajat for your super-awesome response. Sending a smile and a hug, Verlena.