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Absolute Morning

First, its hinted glint tinged the Venetian Blinds like a timid child. Slowly its emboldened gleam permeated the obscure room dispelling night’s cryptic rule. Second, it beamed a brilliant column of sun, glaring through blinds and reflecting against the back wall. Its gradual growing glow bled through cracks and corners of the windows, flooding the room with the brilliant blaze. Finally, the dawn was declared as the golden rapture hollowed out the slightest shadows and took over. Its light became the dominant force defining the new day, the absolute morning.

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Date: 1/28/2025 7:37:00 AM
"Finally,.... dear one, thank you for helping me to details. You're quite organized, a poet indeed who took time observing, sharing. Bless you.
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Thomas Wells
Date: 1/29/2025 11:27:00 PM
Thank you, Iris! I am glad the poem spoke to you. Sometimes inspiration captures me all at once and the organization of my thoughts flows spontaneously. Be well and keep writing! TW
Date: 1/16/2025 3:50:00 PM
Greetings Thomas In this posting, I especially like the way you catch the light in its morning metamorphosis. Excellent images of the dawn's creep. Fine writing my friend.
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Thomas Wells
Date: 1/19/2025 8:05:00 PM
I am so glad you liked it, Brian! I wrote it right after climbing out of bed in the morning. Take care, always. TW
Date: 12/11/2024 11:52:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your poem, well written. A painted picture in words, lovely. kind regards Jx
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Thomas Wells
Date: 12/11/2024 3:56:00 PM
Thank you, Jackie! I'm glad you enjoyed it. Be well always, Thomas.

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