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The sun and the earth and the moon in the sky, The beautiful in between, Determines all everything ever will be and Has determined whatever has been. The fire and water, the air that we breathe, Every creature we smell, touch and see. All is ourselves, together we stand, To be open, happy, honest and free. Free to bathe on a mountain and sing in the clouds, Free to be our own star in the night. We can be every painting with every small tint, and Dance with each beautiful, colorful light. And the best painting of all is inside our head, When everything here is combined, It’s our ability to think, ponder, reason, and create, It’s the freedom we have in our mind.

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Date: 1/18/2017 6:41:00 PM
freedom, i love it x
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Date: 2/6/2017 9:51:00 PM
Thanks Casarah. :)

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