Len Gasun Poet Footle

Absence of Muse

Slow moves
         Need shoves

Mood’s pause
           Mind toast

Long yawns
         Tears shown

Star dusts
         Float fast

Leaned chest
         Bed rest
         
Black out
        Knock out




Feb. 15, 2022   3:02pm


-Just a try of footle poem



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Contest Judged:  2/15/2022 3:13:00 PM
Sponsored by: Brian Strand 
Place 1

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Paula Goldsmith February 16, 2022 at 9:02 AM Congratulations on your win. Your "Absence of Muse" is a creative Footle. Love It. Have a blessed day..............

Anil Deo February 15, 2022 at 4:57 AM ThanX Len, for this footle, a form I tried just 1-2 times. Good summary of writer's block, but much more. I appreciate yr visit to my Page. PTL