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Absence of Color

Up and down motion waved in Looking right into the mouth of sin Hands down looking around town for the one who would love me for me then the we can begin Damned to be in a world of selfishness, hatred and betrayal The veil that blankets me only he can tell Shaded with the absence of color Beautiful I am but... still the rainbow I seek The remembrance of the destruction of the weak Meek I am just like a baby Hoping one day he would save me Save me from damnation and segregation

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Steven Siegel

Date: 8/30/2015 6:25:00 PM

I thought I did. I gave you a seven for it "The veil that blankets me only he can tell Shaded with the absence of color Beautiful I am Is the best part for me. at one time in my life I mistakenly thought segregation was over; but now I can see that we still have along ways to go let. It may not happen in my lifetime, but I pray to God it does in yours.

April Walter Skyy
Date: 8/30/2015 9:46:00 PM

I am so sorry yes you did. Thanks again for commenting on my work!!!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/30/2015 9:48:00 AM

Come to Canada, it is living example of multiple cultures thriving together.

April Walter Skyy
Date: 8/30/2015 9:47:00 PM

I am on my way!!! lol

Steven Siegel

Date: 8/26/2015 10:38:00 PM

Very good, I liked format that you used I could not see anything wrong with it. I know our Savor has you already in his arms just believe that. As far segregation goes I thought one time we had got pass that but I can see we still have a lot work to do let. Hang in there it might be my generation that gets it done, but it might be yours.

April Walter Skyy
Date: 8/26/2015 10:46:00 PM

I look forward to that day. Thank you for stopping pass. I hope to see you again and thank you for the comment. Have a good night!!!

Janice Canerdy

Date: 8/25/2015 9:27:00 PM

Your poem is very moving, conveying the themes of examination of self and world and of want and need. Janice

April Walter Skyy
Date: 8/25/2015 11:17:00 PM

Thank you for comments on my work I am glad you was able to stop pass. I hope to see you again!!! Skyy

Casarah Nance

Date: 8/25/2015 8:17:00 PM

I like that.."Shaded with the absence of color" your search is vivid and intriguing

April Walter Skyy
Date: 8/25/2015 8:27:00 PM

"Thank you". Skyy