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Absence Makes the Heart Grow Stronger

She thought her absence would make his heart grow fonder
While she was gone instead it grew stronger and stronger
Perhaps a sign he didn't need her any longer

He thought back to when they first met
Under the bleachers trying not to get wet
Her hair became so frizzy boy she was upset

He laughed at her gave her a kiss
Thought to himself what could be better than this
Within the storm he found his bliss

Years passed she gained more power
He felt like a male Rapunzel, locked in a tower
What was once sweet had now become sour

He didn't realize her love was a trap
Her absence awoke him from his nap
No longer a puppy on his master's lap

Absence gave him strength to walk away
Tired of the games she liked to play
So he left her in yesterday
Life without her is more than okay



Fortunately my buddy did not fall back 
into her trap. He never did get his 
money back. I guess that was the
price of freedom.

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Richard D Seal November 29, 2013 at 3:47 PM Freedom from misery is always worth every penny, and in time the pain fades away, Another great message of life from you Rick. Take care, Richard Richard Lamoureux November 29, 2013 at 4:38 PM I must agree Richard. Thanks for your always welcome visit.

Cecilia Macfarlane November 28, 2013 at 8:58 AM Glad your buddy woke up from the spell he was under and is now free.....excellent write! Hugs Richard Lamoureux November 28, 2013 at 9:24 AM Thanks Cecillia.

Shadow Hamilton November 24, 2013 at 8:27 PM hey Rick do not break your bank break theirs lol wonderful pen Shadow x smile hug Richard Lamoureux November 25, 2013 at 1:57 AM I'll do my best.:0)

Joseph Sergi November 24, 2013 at 7:43 PM Richard another great one have a good time in Vegas Richard Lamoureux November 24, 2013 at 7:46 PM Thanks Joseph.

Richard Lamoureux November 24, 2013 at 4:39 PM Hello friends I am in Vegas for four days so won't be on the soup very much. Hugs to all..

Ravi Sathasivam November 24, 2013 at 7:22 AM " Absence makes the heart grow stronger".. Well penned. Sad story too. Thanks for sharing. Richard Lamoureux November 24, 2013 at 7:36 AM Thanks Ravi.

Len Gasun November 24, 2013 at 1:16 AM A very powerful and beautiful poem giving encouragement this is my dear friend Richard. The story was so sad but at times like this, we need juicy fruit gums, I mean strength.:))) I remember one of the lines in an old love poem of mine with an irony:Absence makes the heart to wander;))) but I like this one better. Thank you so much for sharing. So love it and enjoyed! Have a blessed wkend! love lots and biggest hugs, Leonora Richard Lamoureux November 24, 2013 at 7:06 AM Thanks Leonoara, you are most kind.

Sandra Adams November 23, 2013 at 8:14 PM sounds as though she gave love a bad name...reminds me of that song...sad when someone likes to try and own a person...good he walked away...sometimes the price of freedom is worth every cent...nice write Richard! Richard Lamoureux November 24, 2013 at 7:07 AM I agree! Have a good Sunday Sandra.

Karen Anglesey November 23, 2013 at 6:03 PM Controlling relationships are so stifling and can creep up so slowly. Very well expressed with inspiring wisdom :) Richard Lamoureux November 24, 2013 at 7:08 AM Thanks Karen.

Eileen Manassian November 23, 2013 at 1:35 PM Glad that he was able to break free, Richard. Yes...reminds me of the song by Alison Moyet...ALL CRIED OUT! He comes back to find her....stronger....Lovely write. Hope you have a great weekend. Caught up on all my posts. Thanks for visiting and reading the comments. HUGS Richard Lamoureux November 24, 2013 at 7:09 AM My pleasure, about to head out on a plane in an hour. Won't have much time to write for the next three days.

Just That Archaic Poet November 23, 2013 at 8:50 AM Your title is so ironic in that I watched this great documentary the other day about Absinthe and I was think about writing a poem entitled "Absinthe Makes the Heart Grow Fonder" lol. Great write, Richard :) Richard Lamoureux November 23, 2013 at 8:53 AM Ha ha, you should write it. Just That Archaic Poet November 23, 2013 at 8:50 AM oops *thinking about*

Anne-Lise Andresen November 23, 2013 at 8:24 AM - Although this is "only" a poem .... I think that many relationships end so ... - A "ticket" to a residence permit in the country .... unfortunately no love from both sides ... well written Richard. - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Richard Lamoureux November 23, 2013 at 8:33 AM Thanks Anne Lise. I have a friend that met a guy on vacation from Nicaragua. Good looking guy, charming, swept her off her feet. They married, he came to Canada and was gone 3 months later. There are those that use people. She was wanting love and for a time he was her dream. Sadly that dream became a nightmare.