Absence

ever felt so alone
like you were in a crowd of people
yelling at the top of your lungs
and no one can hear
see 
or 
acknowledge you
how you cry
and every tear
holds a memory 
that cant be expressed
explained, or even
understood
absent from the world 
but your absences isn't noticed
love of one person
can change your life
appearance
your out look on life 
your self confidence 
can raise or fall
but its up to you
to hold it to your own
extent 
love with your heart and mind
and express yourself 
find someone you can be yourself with
hold her hand
her heart 
her word 
let your soul express itself
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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April 23, 2013 at 10:44 PM
Kahlil, Wishing you a nice warm welcome to the Poetry Soup. I hope you find this community to be one of the best. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself! If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please feel free and look me up by clicking on my name anytime you see it. HUGS <3 from your newest friend ~*~SKAT"
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April 22, 2013 at 4:12 PM
The only time i feel alone, is when I'm broken hearted, and surrounded by people. you have good and deep expressions here. Kahlil, "Welcome to the poetry soup. My name is Linda; many poets on the soup call me PD for fun. I'm stopping by to invite you on over to my latest contest --called the “7 wonders” I'm hoping you will consider the enjoyment and challenges we offer in our contest. If you like, please consider my contest. You can find the contest page on the top left hand side. I’m looking forward in reading and enjoying your poems in the future. Today I will start by reading all you have posted this far..... Thanks @-> LINDA <-@"
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