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Absence

ever felt so alone like you were in a crowd of people yelling at the top of your lungs and no one can hear see or acknowledge you how you cry and every tear holds a memory that cant be expressed explained, or even understood absent from the world but your absences isn't noticed love of one person can change your life appearance your out look on life your self confidence can raise or fall but its up to you to hold it to your own extent love with your heart and mind and express yourself find someone you can be yourself with hold her hand her heart her word let your soul express itself

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Date: 4/23/2013 10:44:00 PM
Kahlil, Wishing you a nice warm welcome to the Poetry Soup. I hope you find this community to be one of the best. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself! If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please feel free and look me up by clicking on my name anytime you see it. HUGS <3 from your newest friend ~*~SKAT"
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Date: 4/22/2013 4:12:00 PM
The only time i feel alone, is when I'm broken hearted, and surrounded by people. you have good and deep expressions here. Kahlil, "Welcome to the poetry soup. My name is Linda; many poets on the soup call me PD for fun. I'm stopping by to invite you on over to my latest contest --called the “7 wonders” I'm hoping you will consider the enjoyment and challenges we offer in our contest. If you like, please consider my contest. You can find the contest page on the top left hand side. I’m looking forward in reading and enjoying your poems in the future. Today I will start by reading all you have posted this far..... Thanks @-> LINDA <-@"
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