Absence

darkness hides clouded skies from my eyes but an absent moon is noticeable with the same depth of the emptiness i feel inside without you here

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Chris Green

Date: 1/6/2020 7:51:00 AM

An evening sky without a moon is at times a lonely sight to see but if the stars reflect in a lover's eyes, then the moon is hiding for a reason. :) Beautifully done Sandy.

Sandra Adams
Date: 1/6/2020 10:11:00 AM

Thank you Chris... hugs

Hello There

Date: 1/5/2020 1:20:00 PM

The moon, to me, is like an anchor. The loss palpable without it as is your poem.

Sandra Adams
Date: 1/5/2020 2:02:00 PM

Thank you so much HT...i always notice the absence of the moon... hugs :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/5/2020 10:20:00 AM

This is a pretty sad one. Hugs Rick.

Sandra Adams
Date: 1/5/2020 2:01:00 PM

Thank you Rick...my muse can flip a switch from happy to sad in a moments notice... hugs :)

Running Wolves

Date: 1/5/2020 7:50:00 AM

This is absolutely beautiful

Sandra Adams
Date: 1/5/2020 7:51:00 AM

Thank you Robert.... :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/5/2020 7:37:00 AM

Emotions succinctly articulated, my friend.

Sandra Adams
Date: 1/5/2020 7:45:00 AM

Thank you my friend.... hugs :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 1/5/2020 5:46:00 AM

Fantastic imagery dearest, Sandra! In a little while the moon would be seen and the sun will follow with his coming! Beautifully written!

Sandra Adams
Date: 1/5/2020 7:21:00 AM

Thank you so much Demetrios... eventually the sun and moon return.... hugs

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/4/2020 11:05:00 PM

Creative comparison… hits the target. ~ Absent (-minded).

Sandra Adams
Date: 1/4/2020 11:11:00 PM

Lol now I know who the absent minded professor is ... thanks for your visit and funny comment ... hugs